Hello, i recently posted my first chapter of my first story for this site and I'm looking for feedback. Here is a link:
https://storiesonline.net/s/16353/batman-arkham-city-chronicles
Any thoughts or suggesting are welcome. Thank you.
Hello, i recently posted my first chapter of my first story for this site and I'm looking for feedback. Here is a link:
https://storiesonline.net/s/16353/batman-arkham-city-chronicles
Any thoughts or suggesting are welcome. Thank you.
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