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Because You Were Cold by Phil Brown

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I've seen nothing here on the forum that recognizes Phil Brown for his recent posting of a revised and complete tale.

His latest blog entry strongly suggests that he is not going to hospice to passively await his time to 'Shuffle off this mortal coil'.

So thank you Phil for your parting gift to your many fans that appreciate your writing.

My best wishes to you and yours in the coming days.

https://storiesonline.net/n/47102/because-you-were-cold

https://storiesonline.net/ablog/Phil_Brown

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@NC-Retired

And as always, I definitely appreciate that he also made it longer, further developing it and giving it a new name, to avoid confusion between the different tales. Kudos!

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Agreed, think this will be my third read through

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Can anyone tell me where the new material starts? Is it feasible to read just the ending or has too much of the prior detail changed?

AJ

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@awnlee jawking

Given the description, I'd daresay it's when he combined the various stories into one (i.e. mostly in the transitions between the different volumes), or possibly building on anything which is more more vital than it was the first time through.

But, we'll never know until we get there! Thus, I'd hold off, and wait till the rest of us discover what what's actually changed. But he has been quite vague on the topic.

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Because You Were Cold by Phil Brown

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