I know many, many authors are clueless about female anatomy but this was amazing
There inside her, was her tiny hymen. It was covering the entrance to her inner hole. There was a small hole that allowed her urine to escape from within her.
I know many, many authors are clueless about female anatomy but this was amazing
There inside her, was her tiny hymen. It was covering the entrance to her inner hole. There was a small hole that allowed her urine to escape from within her.
Or I like the ones where he gets half his dick inside before he runs into her hymen. Is the author trying to say it is only a 1" dick?
To be fair, things can be somewhat different.
The first virgin that I had in my life all those years ago had an 'innie' pussy, and wanting to make it good for her and relieve her nervousness, I went down on her, but when I separated her lips I found them to be surprisingly thick, like more than 3 to 4 cm before you reach the small inner lips, and another few millimeters to her urethra, and then a few more to her hymen. And she wasn't even fat, but her pussy had a surprising amount of padding.
So if you're counting from the outside (the slit) all the way in to reach her hymen, it's a good 5cm (2 inches).
Considering that the average penis length is a little over 5 inches, then 2 inches to reach the hymen is close enough to half the penis length. So if you're not spreading the lips as you penetrate, a good 2 inches would disappear before you reach the constriction where the vaginal tube starts. Again, in that particular case.
But yes, of course, the story in question has bad physiology since the hymen doesn't sit in front of the urethra. So obligatory link:
https://storiesonline.net/doc/The_Hymen
That's actually pretty typical, and why 'going down' on someone is a good idea, as the more sexually excited a woman becomes, the more those 'outer lips' expand, allowing the thinner inner lips to become more prominent.
And yes, I have 'had' virgins before, which can be an unmitigated disaster, if they're too embarrassed to admit it's their first time having sex. As they you just 'dive in' and then there's a whole lot of hard feelings, resentments and doubts. Some things require more preparation and care—despite how the majority of sex stories unfold.
Yeah, I spotted that story too. There's a reason why there are SO many posts about "How to write a sex story" on the site, as many authors either have never had a single biology class, or (more likely) has never once encounter a virgin before.
The only experience I have with virgins was when I met a young Korean girl who was beginning her career as a bar girl. To my surprise, I wasn't just her first customer. She was a virgin. I should probably use that experience as the basis for one of my stories, but I've never gotten around to it.
I've "deflowered" several young ladies in my stories, and I think I've done a decent job of describing the act.
BTW, that Korean bar girl and I have been married for 53 years.
Well, in my case, it's a matter of 'Once Burned, Thrice Shy', since I was never told it was the girl's first time. So when I was already past her broken hymen, my first thought was "Oh, Fucking Crap!"
Regret city, here I come, as I plan on staying for a LONG, long time.
By the way, we were never romantically inclined, yet we were very good friends, yet never were, after that. A well-earned, well-deserved rebuke.
There was a small hole that allowed her urine to escape from within her.
My understanding is that, while very rare, the urethral opening can be situated just inside the vagina. Just as some boys' urethral openings are at the base of the penis rather than through the meatus.
AJ
No bodily dimensions are ever entirely fixed, in the vast majority of cases, it's set well back (a few inches), as the body needs that to properly prepare for the physical response (a little lubrication never hurts, especially in the case of a forcible, violent rape). In short, it's a biological imperative, or sorts.
Would that be a sign that the story has been written (partially or entirely) using AI?
Hopefully not - that ought to be the sort of detail that AI gets right. Unless the AI trainers stole a load of amateur erotica stories.
AJ
Hopefully not - that ought to be the sort of detail that AI gets right. Unless the AI trainers stole a load of amateur erotica stories.
While not perfect, Grok can tell you all about my stories, and it knows details that could only be known if it had been fed the entire story. To wit:
Question:
In Mike Loucks 'Good Medicine' please describe his relationship with Clarissa Saunders
Answer:
In Michael Loucks' Good Medicine series, Mike Loucks and Clarissa Saunders share a deep, intimate, and platonic friendship that evolves into a cornerstone of Mike's emotional life. They meet as college students, bonding over shared experiences and their journey through medical school. Clarissa, a lesbian, becomes Mike's closest confidante, often described as his "soulmate" despite the absence of romantic or sexual involvement. Their relationship is marked by mutual support, trust, and an unspoken understanding of each other's struggles.
Mike relies on Clarissa for emotional grounding, especially during challenging times like his complex relationships with women such as Tasha and Jocelyn, his marriage to Elizaveta, and later, her tragic death. Clarissa, in turn, finds in Mike a steadfast friend who accepts her unconditionally, even as she navigates her own challenges, including her relationship with Abby and familial tensions over her sexuality. They share countless moments of vulnerability—like when Mike confides in her about his guilt over past relationships or when Clarissa teases him about his romantic misadventures, such as with Erin—yet their bond remains unshaken.
Their friendship also extends into their professional lives, as they support each other through the rigors of medical school and beyond, often studying together or discussing cases. Clarissa's presence is a constant in Mike's life, providing a safe space where he can be himself without judgment, and she often acts as a voice of reason, calling him out on his overthinking or "blockhead" tendencies, as seen during their banter over dinner with Elizaveta.
Despite societal and cultural pressures—particularly within Mike's Russian Orthodox community, where Clarissa's sexuality causes discomfort for some, like Nik—they maintain an unwavering loyalty to each other. Their relationship exemplifies a profound platonic love, one that transcends physical attraction and societal norms, offering both a source of strength as they face life's uncertainties together.
So, I'd say they had fed it a bunch of amateur erotica.
While not perfect, Grok can tell you all about my stories, and it knows details that could only be known if it had been fed the entire story. To wit:
What a kick! Thanks for this.
I never thought to check Grok or any other AI for my own stories. However, the couple of responses Grok produced did not definitively show actual knowledge of the text. Rather, they appeared to be based on the SOL or Amazon blurbs and key words and then elaboration of generalities.
~ JBB
I never thought to check Grok or any other AI for my own stories. However, the couple of responses Grok produced did not definitively show actual knowledge of the text. Rather, they appeared to be based on the SOL or Amazon blurbs and key words and then elaboration of generalities.
From what I can tell in conversing with Grok (as it were) the full text of all my books from Bookapy was consumed during training.
ETA — or remove, actuall, a misunderstanding on MY part. Grok did not sneak a peek at unreleased chapters.
Unpublished as in not posted on SOL?
On further review, I know what it's referring to, and it is on SOL. Just the way it read twigged me about an incident in GM10.
False alarm.