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Accuracy - is it necessary in a reality soap opera.

solreader50 🚫
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I am reading and thoroughly enjoying Dual Writer's Vacation series, currently nearing the end of book 2. It's is a bit of a soap opera about an ex-Marine who builds up a company in Tampa which makes him lots and lots of money and gains him lots and lots of friends. There were a few details in book 1, especially about the pilot training where I thought he was flying on a wing and prayer.

But then the story moves, in stages, to sailing in large 165ft (50m) pleasure yacht and I started to get annoyed with the author for the lack of reality. Like crossing the North Atlantic in January, just after New Year, in a time quicker than a Blue Riband steamer. And passing Gibraltar telling of how the British captured the rock from the Germans in WW2. (Oh really!!!).

Then getting from Gib to Athens in Greece in two days, only to find women sunbathing naked on yachts in the harbor. 2 minutes of Wikipedia research suggests the average maximum temperature would be 15C (58F). Hardly sunbathing temperatures. My own memory of Athens in January involves the white fluffy stuff.

They then manage to sail overnight to Palermo in Sicily, 580 nautical miles. There are long nights in January but not that long. The night in January in Palermo is 14 hours so that means a speed of 41 knots - but it's a yacht not a hovercraft. The story will go on (I've not reached this bit yet) to describe the nude beaches on the French Riviera. Which I imagine will be remarkably empty in February.

Does this kind of lack of attention to detail annoy other readers or am I just being particularly anal tonight?

sunseeker 🚫
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@solreader50

when I read the series I just looked at them as the authors fantasies...nothing based in any kind of reality...in a fantasy anything can happen...

SunSeeker

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solreader50 🚫

@sunseeker

After a few days consideration I have come to agree with you. There is so much else about the stories that is pure fantasy so why shouldn't the author take liberties with geography and nautical skills. Although it annoyed me, the inaccuracies did not detract from my enjoyment of the whole story to which I gave a deserved "Great".

Pixy 🚫
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@solreader50

research suggests the average maximum temperature would be 15C (58F). Hardly sunbathing temperatures

It is in Scotland ...

I think most readers are used to a degree of 'handwavium' when it comes to the realities of, well, reality.

The more 'technical' you become, the higher the chance you have of annoying those who are intimate with the subject at hand. You know the usual standard tropes, endless magazines in war movies, big fireballs when the grenade goes off, no weapon recoil. For most, those inaccuracies are not an issue.

And then there are the people who watch porn movies about a housewife paying the bill, by allowing the plumber to rod all her orifices and yet all they complain about is how unreal it is because you would never get a plumber round that quickly ...

So yeah, if you happen to be knowledgeable in a certain field, then you are most likely going to be irate about something factually incorrect, that's in a story for the sake of plot expediency. I wrote and posted a 24 thousand word story that had a short 20 word or so segment where the protagonist balances a (car) wheel and I got it (the process) wrong and by jove, did the PM's not inform me of that fact ... To the majority of readers, they wouldn't care of the process, but I certainly riled up all the tyre fitters.

:Edit: removed a superfluous 'K'

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Pixy 🚫

@Pixy

I've just remembered a lengthy (genuine) 'critique' of a porn movie where the the individual went into great detail about how the tools in the 'plumbers' bag were all the wrong tools for a plumber and were better suited for a joiner.

The individual was probably not wrong, with the bag in question most likely 'borrowed' from one of the genuine set dressers/chippies in the film crew.

I found it all rather amusing at the time, because the majority of those watching the movie, would not be doing so for the plumbing tips. well, not those ones anyway ...

solreader50 🚫

@Pixy

It is in Scotland ...

You're not wrong there. On my first cruise through the Hebrides we anchored in a cove in SW Mull. And then went for a walk over the hill to what looked on the map like a sandy bay. This would be in mid-May. At the beach we were surprised by around 10 students, male and female, playing beach volleyball naked. Temperature was probably around 15C or less.

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awnlee jawking 🚫

@solreader50

playing beach volleyball naked.

Disturbing thought: if you kick a guy in the balls, isn't it pretty much guaranteed to be a volley? :-)

AJ

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@solreader50

solreader50 What you write about is not the worst of it.

Dual Writer takes liberties with any technical aspect in his various tales.

Poured cement is not usable in 24 hours. Epoxy floor covering is not usable in 24 hours. You do not 'meld' a race car frame from tubing without a jig. And et cetera.

DW's writings are not the only examples of tales where reality - the time it takes for some action - is stretched far beyond the point of suspension of disbelief.

Most of the worst are tales where the protagonist is transported into what we know as the 'middle ages' and then proceeds to bring that society into the early industrial age through sheer knowledge transfer.

Ok... But that society is not going from early bloomery iron that produces a few pounds of pig iron to furnaces that produce tons of steel in just 2-3 years. Rolling mills that produce large flat sheets in that same time frame? Railroad rails? Steam power? Ha!

Yeah and yeah, fast adoption of technology may be necessary for the plot of the tale proceed. But the possibility is bogus.

In another thread the question of what story codes would cause me to not read a tale?

AFAIK, there is no codes for accelerated technology development or unrealistic times for some physical actions.

But as soon as I read an author's tale that has ignored physical reality I will abandon the story like dropping a hot potato.

As always, your personal tolerance for utter bullshit may be vastly different than mine.

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Dominions Son 🚫
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@NC-Retired

Ok... But that society is not going from early bloomery iron that produces a few pounds of pig iron to furnaces that produce tons of steel in just 2-3 years.

And even if you know how a modern blast furnace works in enough detail to have an idea of how to build one, do you know how to make the tools you need to build it? How to make the tools you need to make those tools? And so on down to the level of tech you find yourself in.

This is something I've always found implausible in time travel stories.

Modern technology sits on the top of a very tall ladder representing 1000s of years of development. You can't come in at the bottom and get to the top by skipping rungs. Each rung is necessary to achieving the next rung.

If a given story is interesting enough, I can set the implausibility aside and still enjoy the story.

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Pixy 🚫

@Dominions Son

Modern technology sits on the top of a very tall ladder representing 1000s of years of development. You can't come in at the bottom and get to the top by skipping rungs. Each rung is necessary to achieving the next rung.

You posted this whilst I was still typing my rant.

I disagree, see my above post. It took as long as it did because no one knew it was possible. Baby steps had to be made.

If a time traveller were to go back, they would know it was possible and could indeed skip development rungs because they already knew the end result was possible.

You only need one person to know what to do, everyone else only needs to be able to follow orders.

For instance, once you have the basis, and infrastructure, to send analogue signals, the jump from analogue signal down the wire to a digital one, is not that big a step if you know what you are doing.

Whilst the general populace would be too thick to comprehend the break neck speed of technological advance, the scientists of the time would be in a perpetual state of confusion as their 'fundamentals' would be continually shifting, probably leading to the mother of all mental meltdowns.

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Dominions Son 🚫
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@Pixy

I disagree, see my above post. It took as long as it did because no one knew it was possible. Baby steps had to be made.

I didn't say that advanced knowlege couldn't accelerate the advancement of technology at all. However, you still don't get to skip steps unless you bring the necessary physical infrastructure with you.

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Pixy 🚫

@Dominions Son

However, you still don't get to skip steps unless you bring the necessary physical infrastructure with you

Not sure about that. I think you could skip plenty of steps if you knew what you were doing.

I know next to nothing about engineering so feel free to correct and educate me.

Was basic metallurgy not done with charcoal and iron ore? If you had the education and the knowledge, could you not skip the whole charcoal thing and go straight to coal? That would save the better part of a century on its own. Early metallurgy was very labour intensive with mechanical mechanisms taking quite a few years (yet again, another century?) to evolve.

If your time traveller landed in say, Pictish times, and in Wales (England), then you have all the starting requirements to get out of the door running. All you need is hills, rain, trees, coal and iron ore. The trees provide the basics of shelter and structural integrity. You could use the trees to either damn or restrict a nearby river to provide head for water power. The trees you fell and carve into gears and drive shafts. A simple frame and some branches in the river will give you a basic waterwheel you can use to power two stone slabs and grind grain and limestone.

Mix mud and grass/hay for 'reinforced' mud and you are on the way to make your first kiln and bricks. Once you have made your simple wooden gears, knock the teeth off one quarter of a gear and you have the mechanism for a basic drop hammer.

Use that drop hammer to crush your iron ore. And you can also use that drop hammer to pound your (Pig?) iron and limestone (so the limestone can fit into your grain mill).

Using mud/clay with grass/hay as internal reinforcing, you can make large bore clay pipes. Using branches carved into vanes and attached to your water wheel, you have just created the world's first motorised fan. Stick the fan in front of your clay pipe and run the clay pipe to your furnace, and have you not just 'invented' the world's first rudimentary blast furnace?

Anyway, you are now making large amounts of molten iron, so you start pouring it into clay/mud forms you have made in the outlines of shafts and gears. You then start replacing your wooden shafts and gears with your cast ones, along with casting 'propeller's' which you already know to twist slightly to increase wind capture. With cast parts, you can increase the energy capture from your river source.

Now that you have increased the torque you get from the river and the fact that you now have cast gears, you can now cast solid iron cylinders. You attach your new iron gears to your new 'rollers' and the gears to your water mill and you now have a means of rolling out your molten metal into sheets.

Rivets are dead simple to make and with drive shafts from the water mill, you can now drill into those metal sheets and start to make (fluid) tanks and basic metal pipes. You are now well into steam power in the space of a month.

Your powdered limestone is dried at your furnace, and whilst I don't know how cement is actually made, I'm of the understanding that the main ingredient is dried limestone. So you are well on the way to make a cement factory.

You already know steam can power a train engine, so you save the centuries it took to learn that and go straight to making rails and steam engines.

Gunpowder is basically charcoal, finely ground, mixed in with a little bit of sulphur and a nitrate, which I think you can get from bird guano? So you now have rudimentary explosives to mine better and faster, therefore increasing you metal ore output, which allows you to smelt more and in turn, make more.

If you have the manpower, all this can be achieved easily in a month. The hardest and most time consuming part, is going to be the initial making of shafts and gears out of wood with basic tools made out of flint.

Once you are casting iron, you can start making hammers, saws, drill bits and chisels en masse and there will be no stopping you.

It's simply a case of scale. Once you have made smelting possible on a large scale along with the addition of cement, you can craft stronger dams, which allow for greater head and more power.

With the arrival of steam, you can make traction engines which not only will allow you to farm large scale, but will power your sawmills where running water is not available (Which given that it's Wales, is not going to be an issue!)

Your next goal would be to find copper ore. With that, you can start making electrical cables and motors out of the copper wire, since you already know that is possible. Stick your new copper motors on the bank next to your river/damn and you now have electricity. Electricity wasn't really discovered till the middle of the 1700's I believe, though I could be wrong.

All this is easily achieved in a year, so you have compressed over two thousand years of human innovation into one year. All that was required, was to know that it was possible in the first place, which you would do if you were a time traveller.

NC-Retired 🚫

@Pixy

All this is easily achieved in a year, so you have compressed over two thousand years of human innovation into one year. All that was required, was to know that it was possible in the first place, which you would do if you were a time traveller.

Nope. Ya canna build a factory without the foundation of general knowledge across the general population and especially the more intelligent people.

Chemistry. Advanced math. Physics. All of these and more are requirements to achieve any rapid advancement.

It's not often that I agree with DS, but he's correct that advancement cannot skip the steps on the ladder.

To your point, staying on any one step for years may not be necessary, but if'n y'all don't understand what's happening in the cauldron, it'll be difficult to make the 'magic' brew.

Knowledge across a great many intellects is a necessary precursor to success.

I refer you to the various stories by https://storiesonline.net/a/ScotlandtheBrave

The protagonist was transported back and tried to bring the country forward in technology. The author details in a realistic manner many of the obstacles that were (and would be) encountered.

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Pixy 🚫

@NC-Retired

Nope. Ya canna build a factory without the foundation of general knowledge across the general population and especially the more intelligent people.

Chemistry. Advanced math. Physics. All of these and more are requirements to achieve any rapid advancement.

I politely disagree.

Having been in charge of individuals of, um, err, non existent education, you do not need to know applied mathematics to chop a tree down, or carry out complex tasks. You just need one individual to know what they are doing, to ensure that that the process is carried out in the correct sequence.

This is proven quite well by the internet and you-tube, where simple Google searches will show you some men, in bare feet, in some third world country, melting down scrap and pouring the molten metal into forms dug out of the ground. Very few of these individuals can read, write and have no education other than they started off in these foundries as kids and simply learned by "monkey see, monkey do".

If you read my example, you will see that there is no need for chemistry (of any level), maths (of any level) physics (of any level) required to carry out the work as described. All you need is one individual to say "Put that funny looking stone (ore) in that crusher till I say stop" or keep that fire at that colour via the bellows till I say stop" etc etc. Pretty much in the same way that I do not need to know how a computer computes to access the internet, or even know how the internet works to use the internet"

In fact, the most 'mathematical' task in my example is the creation of cogs, but again, you don't need to know maths to make a cog, you just need a wooden disc and some charcoal to outline the teeth in a fairly regular symmetrical pattern, which you can give to someone with the instruction "Cut out the black bits", once the first cog is made, you simply place it down on the next wooden blank and trace out the teeth on the new blank with your charcoal. You need absolutely no education to watch that process and carry it out yourself, after all that's basically how every basic apprenticeship in the world is carried out.

Do you honestly believe that the children in sweat shops in India, China, Malaysia etc etc have degrees in STEM to carry out the tasks of assembling the components of your electrical goods? Of course they don't, they can barely read or write (if at all). They have no idea as to why the components they assemble do the things they do, they just know that that bit goes in that whole.

Eventually, come the digital age, education will be important, but at the initial stages, the only requirement is strong muscles, a stable food supply and (as any assembly line worker will attest) the ability to shut off your mind for long periods of time as you carry out the repetitive monotonous task.

I think you may, in fact, be overthinking the problem. Yes, if you are creating something brand new, then applied sciences is definitely a help, but we are not creating anything new in this scenario. What needs creating, has already been created and it's a simple case of production, not design. The design has already been done in the future and carried back to the past by your (the) time traveller.

Or to put it another way, think about the Romans and the Egyptians. They built their pyramids, roads and aqueducts using large amounts of uneducated slaves under the control of a foreman. The foreman is your time traveller, versed in STEM, the slaves (the 'populace' in this scenario) that do all the work have absolutely no comprehension of gravity and physics other than if they fall off the top, they are probably going to die, and yet lacking any education, they still managed to build structures that last to this day.

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@Pixy

Pixy... Over the years of reading this forum I have read many of your posts and I have to say that I agree with most of your arguments as well thought out and logical.

This one I will respectfully say no.

My 35 years of experience as a journeyman and technical writer in a heavy industry tells me that folks can be directed by someone more knowledgeable but they cannot excel at the directed task unless they are of an intellectual capacity to understand the nuances of the task.

A good understanding of the nuances of the task make the difference between minimal success in a longer time frame and roaring success in a shorter period.

Sure the Egyptians used forced labor to construct their stone monoliths and monuments up and down the Nile. But it was not one individual doing the directing of the forced labor. There were thousands and thousands of individuals that understood both the immediate goal of the day and the overall scheme of whatever the construction was.

It was their knowledge and intellect that allowed the construction to proceed at a timely pace. They're the ones that saw some portion could be more efficient if done a slightly different way. And then did it.

And that's my point... thousands and thousands of people with both knowledge and experience to direct the uneducated masses to perform some specific aspect of the overall task.

Those thousands need to be at least minimally educated. One protagonist going back can educate a few and in turn they can educate more and in turn those dozens can educate more dozens and in turn the dozens educate many.

Yes, small tasks can be performed to help and speed their education. But how many will be injured as they learn the nuances of their tasks? How many uneducated are you willing to sacrifice?

Ignorance and superstition have to be overcome in more primitive societies. How much of a speed bump will that be?

Then... let's not forget religious interference. Leonardo da Vinci and Michelangelo are just two of the more well known polymaths that were persecuted by religious zealots that could not let go of their dogma.

Success will build on success. Willing participation will increase when people see the benefits. But that increased participation will not be 'snap the fingers' quick.

Pouring molten metal and have some catastrophe occur will start the rumors of witchcraft and evil no matter the previous successes.

Mine cave ins. Coal dust explosions from the exposed flames of the lanterns. A bazillion different scenarios of failure abound.

How does our time traveler teach people to identify ore bearing rocks? How far away is the lode? Is there a road or trail? Are carts strong enough to carry away the ore?

Yes, progress is possible at an accelerated rate from what we understand of our collective history but it will be at a pace that the locals of that time are able to absorb and deal with.

Again, my experience strongly suggests education and understanding of basic physical principles will speed the entire process, but there is no magic that will make it instantaneous or without physical injury to the many that are actually doing the tasks.

For a more in-depth understanding of limitations, I commend to you the following:

James Burke and his two series, Connections (British TV series) and The Day the Universe Changed. Both available on yewtoob.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/James_Burke_(science_historian)

And then Carl Sagan's Cosmos: A Personal Voyage https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cosmos:_A_Personal_Voyage Again, yewtoob

And then the update by Neil deGrasse Tyson, Cosmos: A Spacetime Odyssey. I bought this one and have not looked to see if it is on yewtoob.

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Pixy 🚫

@NC-Retired

Okay. Let me try and phrase this in a slightly different way. Could you tell me what qualifications are needed to follow a charcoal line on a piece of wood with a simple saw? Accuracy is not that important as you are not creating a cog for a timepiece.

The Egyptian analogy was probably a bad one to start with as that requires the presence of thousands, where in this scenario you are looking at around twenty or so people (workers) max. A number easily looked over by one learned individual (in this case the time travelling protagonist) after an initial period of a week if more people can be gained, then the work force will grow with the existing workforce mentoring then new comers. Since it is simple manual labour of chopping down tree's and digging holes/collecting rocks, I don't see a need to mentor of more than a day. When technology advances to the level of say, a water powered saw mill, or water powered mill with two stones for the crushing of grain and stone, again, I don't see a mentoring time needed of more than a day.

It was their knowledge and intellect that allowed the construction to proceed at a timely pace. They're the ones that saw some portion could be more efficient if done a slightly different way. And then did it.

I agree full heartedly, in this case the knowledge comes from the time traveller and the 'locals' could well see a more efficient way of doing things in relation to the tech level they are used to and the tools they currently posses. After all, history has proved our very distant ancestors to be very good at improvisation.

Those thousands need to be at least minimally educated

Actually, they weren't. Most were non educated slaves. The only 'craftsmen' were the ones doing the painting and the stone carving.

One protagonist going back can educate a few and in turn they can educate more and in turn those dozens can educate more dozens and in turn the dozens educate many.

Full heartedly agree. One can easily train ten. Those ten can train ten each and on you go exponentially. Since the tasks are simple ones, like this how to fell a tree with a wedge, this is how you work a mill stone, these are all easily taught tasks within a day.

But how many will be injured as they learn the nuances of their tasks? How many uneducated are you willing to sacrifice?

That depends on the quality of the initial training and the dangerousness of the task. The fatality level and the amount the protagonist is willing to lose, is up to the writer and would be a good plot point carrying the story forward.

Ignorance and superstition have to be overcome in more primitive societies. How much of a speed bump will that be?

No idea, that would be up to the writer and how much of a plot point they wish to make it. It also depends on what time point the traveller is sent back to. If you were to use my example, it would be before the rise of Christianity and the Catholic church. I can't remember, but wasn't the church the main antagonist for a Baen series? Safehold or something by David Weber, I think it was. But it's not really an issue with pre Christianity as it was mostly singular shamans that were in control. Simply kill the Shaman and the religious problem basically goes away.

Then... let's not forget religious interference. Leonardo da Vinci and Michelangelo are just two of the more well known polymaths that were persecuted by religious zealots that could not let go of their dogma.

I touched on that in an earlier post.

Success will build on success. Willing participation will increase when people see the benefits. But that increased participation will not be 'snap the fingers' quick

Agreed, but given the time frame, quality of life was pretty terrible in those days and not much would be needed to attract people to your cause. Literarily regular food and a roof over your head was counted as the height of luxury in those days. Actually, now that I think about it, that state of affairs still exists for many people even in this day and age.

Pouring molten metal and have some catastrophe occur will start the rumors of witchcraft and evil no matter the previous successes.

Also agree. I purposefully never mentioned the dangers of overly moist moulds (made out of mud that's not properly dried) leading to steam explosions and subsequent molten metal everywhere for the sake of brevity. There is a famous saying "History is written by the winners" and it exists for a reason. Also, humans like to be led and are easily led. So there could be problems with 'withcraft'. History has shown that these rumours were normally fuelled by charismatic individuals. It's up to the writer whether the protagonist tries to get that individual onto their side or just kills them. Personally, these individuals are in that position because of the power it gives them (over the naive populace) and my personal preference, were I to be ever in that situation, is to kill them as quickly as possible with the excuse that the 'shaman' offended the god and was punished for it.

Mine cave ins. Coal dust explosions from the exposed flames of the lanterns. A bazillion different scenarios of failure abound.

Agreed, though one expects the protagonist to know that and act accordingly (since they already know about basic metallurgy).

How does our time traveler teach people to identify ore bearing rocks? How far away is the lode? Is there a road or trail? Are carts strong enough to carry away the ore?

No idea. That sounds like a good plot driver to me. Given the time-frame of my example, these would all need to be built. Romans gave the UK the gift of roads and since the time frame of the example is/was before the time of the Romans, the T-traveller would be the one to introduce the natives to the art of road building. Not that it would be too much hardship as they would use the detritus of the quarrying operations. Again the theory of road building is remarkably simple and the principle could be taught over a few days with experience gained 'on the job'. I don't know about now, but the history of the Romans and how they built roads was taught to all Primary school children when I was of that age. I don't what the USA equivalent of the UK primary school is. Elementary school? Basically it was taught to kids under ten years of age.

Yes, progress is possible at an accelerated rate from what we understand of our collective history but it will be at a pace that the locals of that time are able to absorb and deal with

Agreed. I, no doubt like you, have been on many training courses over the years and every course has individuals that just soak up the knowledge like a sponge and ones that are as porous as granite. Alas, I tended to be in the later group :( But as I have frequently mentioned, the level of technology and the learning required is not complicated, it's basically swinging axes and pick axes. I suppose one way to look at it, is WW2. In the UK, we ran out of working age men pretty quickly and had to resort to using unskilled and uneducated women to do many jobs they had previously never attempted from working farm machinery to working in ammunition factories. The change of jobs and the requirement to suddenly learn complex skills was pretty brutal for the time and the dangers of poor training and simple mistakes was also pretty brutal. Especially for the women who worked in the ammunition factories. Many of whom had never done anything so fastidiously technical before in their lives. They didn't have years to learn their new trades of milling and engineering. They had days. They also had a very good impetus in which to learn. This would obviously prove to be an issue when the war was over and many men returned to find their previously 'highly skilled' jobs taken over by cheaper paid women who had never spent the years of apprenticeship that they had.

my experience strongly suggests education and understanding of basic physical principles will speed the entire process, but there is no magic that will make it instantaneous or without physical injury to the many that are actually doing the tasks.

Again, you are looking at it from a position of modern technology and training requirements. Take another leaf out of the book of history. In WW2 if you wanted to fly a fighter plane, you said so and you were given a week or so of theory and stuck in a plane, no previous experience or knowledge required. Several of the UK fighter aces in the Battle of Britain, for instance, could not read nor write, but were still damn good at flying. Nowadays, if you want to fly a plane you have to learn so much and have several hundred hours of flying with an experienced pilot before you are allowed to fly solo. Much of what you have to learn, isn't actually required to fly a plane, but is required to satisfy all the rules and regs that are required these days. In fact, this is why developed countries lose so much industry to third world countries, because we require workers to be familiar with a myriad of rules and regulations that aren't particularly pertinent to the job at hand. It was not that long ago the UK happily sent children down the mines. The job didn't entail anything they couldn't easily grasp. These children were barely educated and not to far apart, education wise, from the average worker of 300AD.

Modern society is remarkably risk adverse and that is having a profound effect on how we do things, and also on the level of skill we think our distant ancestors required to do things.

I shall look at the links you have kindly provided, but I'm basing my opinion on my own life skills and experience of what is actually required to the tasks I have mentioned.

Dominions Son 🚫

@Pixy

Was basic metallurgy not done with charcoal and iron ore? If you had the education and the knowledge, could you not skip the whole charcoal thing and go straight to coal? That would save the better part of a century on its own. Early metallurgy was very labour intensive with mechanical mechanisms taking quite a few years (yet again, another century?) to evolve.

Yes it was. However:
Does your time traveler know how to find coal seams?
Does he know how to mine coal?
Does he have the tools needed to mine coal?
If not does he know how to make the necessary tools?

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Pixy 🚫

@Dominions Son

Does your time traveler know how to find coal seams?
Does he know how to mine coal?
Does he have the tools needed to mine coal?
If not does he know how to make the necessary tools?

Absolutely no idea. That depends on the individual who writes these types of stories.

Personally, I have absolutely no idea as to how to recognise iron ore, or how to determine where a coal seam lies under the ground. In fact, I would make a rather shit time traveller and a rather useless protagonist. But that's not really an issue, as my understanding of the matter, is that the type of individuals that end up going back in time, tend to be ... I forget the term, Mary Sues?

All I did, was look at the scenario given, from a semi educated point of view.

In fact, afterwards, I thought how simple it would be for a semi literate person sent back in time to distil alcohol, which would help kick start a new society almost instantly (in historical terms) into the era of the combustion engine, completely skipping oil and it's vastly more complex distillation process.

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awnlee jawking 🚫

@Pixy

from a semi educated point of view

The more STEM advances, the more the practitioners insist you need all sorts of degrees and certificates before you're capable of practitioning, thus making it a closed shop :-(

I've seen too many companies insist you must have a degree before you're deemed capable of writing a computer program.

AJ

Dominions Son 🚫

@awnlee jawking

I've seen too many companies insist you must have a degree before you're deemed capable of writing a computer program.

I work in IT. It's worse than you say. It doesn't have to be a computer related degree, or even a STEM degree. It could be a degree in basket weaving or grievance group studies.

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awnlee jawking 🚫

@Dominions Son

It could be a degree in basket weaving

Hey, basket weaving might become a necessary skill after the wokerrati get all plastics banned :-)

AJ

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Dominions Son 🚫

@awnlee jawking

:D

Pixy 🚫

@awnlee jawking

The more STEM advances, the more the practitioners insist you need all sorts of degrees and certificates before you're capable of practitioning, thus making it a closed shop :-(

Unfortunately, I have had many a run in with Health and Safety officials who have thrown their degrees in my non-educated face (I was 12 when I learned the months of the year and 14 when I finally learned the alphabet) as the reason why they were right and I was wrong. In every single case, I have stood my ground and refused to adhere to their 'recommendations' because I knew their 'recommendations' to be dangerous. Every time it went higher where the situation was looked at by people with actual experience in the matter and the decisions went my way.

It's an absolutely bonkers situation and only getting worse.

For instance, in the UK, you pass your drivers licence and theory test and that's you till your like 70 or something and then you need medicals. If you want to drive a digger, dumper, crane or whatever, you need to sit a requisite 'driving' test and theory test for that item of equipment, which lasts for five years and then you have to sit another theory test and operator test. Every five years. I bet the operators of those pieces of equipment spend more time operating that equipment every day than they do driving their cars.

solreader50 🚫

@awnlee jawking

I've seen too many companies insist you must have a degree before you're deemed capable of writing a computer program.

As someone who was up to his knees in microprocessors (of the 4 and 8 bit variety) before there were any computing degrees, I so agree with you. Good coders can code and bad coders can't. No matter whether they have a degree or not.

Grant 🚫

@Pixy

I think you could skip plenty of steps if you knew what you were doing.

It depends what you are doing- but in many cases you need each of those steps in order to reach the final goal- no skipping steps is possible because each of the steps are necessary.
It's all well and good knowing what's needed to make a finished car, but then you need all of the components that go into that finished car. And all of the raw resources required to make all of those components, and the knowledge of how to make them into the components you need. As well as the volumes required.

John Wales Proeliator is one of the best stories i've read here for someone going back in time, and then using their knowledge to move things forward at a greatly advanced rate.

His description of what is involved in making tools with the technology available at the time, in order to make tools, that allow him to make tools, to allow him to make tools to eventually start producing steel. Then the work that goes in to make more tools out of that steel to make more tools to produce actual products out of that steel.
And the same for producing tools to allow the production of chemicals to produce more tools, to allow the production of more chemicals, to produce more tools, to produce more chemicals- at a scale to support the manufacture of steel, glass and explosives, and the food & housing and medicines for the people that are needed to do that work.

His description of the steps required to produce certain chemicals, and the many stages you go through to go from one group of chemicals to another, several times over to get the final chemical that you need for a particular job i personally found very interesting.

https://storiesonline.net/s/50903/proeliator

Dominions Son 🚫

@Grant

It's all well and good knowing what's needed to make a finished car, but then you need all of the components that go into that finished car. And all of the raw resources required to make all of those components, and the knowledge of how to make them into the components you need. As well as the volumes required.

Don't forget the machines and tools needed to make the components and the tools and machines needed to make the tools and machines...

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Grant 🚫

@Dominions Son

Don't forget the machines and tools needed to make the components and the tools and machines needed to make the tools and machines...

Exactly.

Pixy 🚫

@Grant

no skipping steps is possible because each of the steps are necessary

You miss understood the point I was making. I wasn't talking about skipping the parts of the process to make items, I was talking about skipping the parts required to find out how to make the parts of the process.

Humanity didn't know how to make iron off the bat, it learned by trying different recipes, ie different ores and materials to see what happened, you know the bits where they added bark and flowers to see what, if any, affect it had on the process. That all takes time and that 'testing' process was the bit I meant about skipping.

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Grant 🚫

@Pixy

I was talking about skipping the parts required to find out how to make the parts of the process.

Which is only possible if the person that goes back has that knowledge.
And many of even the more basic items we take for granted are based on things that require not just a thorough knowledge, but understanding of, maths (and of it's many various forms), chemistry, physics (and it's many different disciplines), metallurgy, etc, etc.

Take something as simple as brake pads for a car.
Someone might know what they are made of, but they are unlikely to know the best type of ore, the how to process and refine it, how to then turn it into material suitable to be used as a brake pad, then how to attach it to the metal plate. Same for that metal plate- how to process and refine it, turn in in to the right type of metal for the job.
And if you wish to produce more than just a couple of pads, they would need the knowledge of the type of machinery required, and the metal used for it, along with it's processing & refining, and the knowledge of how to work it to produce the final machines to produce the brake pads.

There is so much underlying knowledge that underpins even many of the most basic things we take for granted that for just one person to be able to bring a civilisation up quickly by skipping steps just isn't possible.

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Pixy 🚫

@Grant

Which is only possible if the person that goes back has that knowledge.

Which is the whole point of this thread!!!! Glad to see you were paying attention ... πŸ˜›

The discussion is on how a time traveller will effect the speed of technological advance with the knowledge they posses.

just one person to be able to bring a civilisation up quickly by skipping steps just isn't possible.

Of course they would. Invention is all about trying things to see if they work or not, or to see what happens. Someone going back in time knows that trying to turn lead into gold will not work, yet humanity spent centuries wasting time trying to make it work.

As I said repeatedly before, I'm not skipping the steps in the actual physical process of manufacturing an item, I'm skipping all the steps that were the failed experiments involved in the many attempts to reach the finished product. Take for instance WD40. The 40 relates to the previous 39 failed attempts. Each of those attempts took months and the whole process took years before the final product reached the shelves. A time traveller can go back and say "This is the formula that works" the product is made in a couple of days and several years have been skipped. Now picture that happening in every advance up to the steam age and instead of it taking a thousand years as it did in reality, it takes ten, because of the fruitless testing is skipped, because the time traveller knows that square wheels don't work, that a circle is the optimum shape for a wheel etc etc. That is the point I am obviously failing to make.

Dominions Son 🚫
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@Pixy

Someone going back in time knows that trying to turn lead into gold will not work, yet humanity spent centuries wasting time trying to make it work.

Yeah, No. The way you phrase this implies some kind of concerted effort by entire civilizations. That's not how it was.

Were there individual people who spent their lives trying to figure that out? Yes. Generally, they were considered crackpots, not just by modern people, but in their own day.

I'm skipping all the steps that were the failed experiments involved in the many attempts to reach the finished product.

You are missing that this requires detail knowledge of not just what the components are, but how to make the components, how to make the tools needed to make the components, how to make the tools to make those tools.

It's simply implausible that any one person in the modern world has that level of knowlege.

Take for instance WD40. The 40 relates to the previous 39 failed attempts. Each of those attempts took months and the whole process took years before the final product reached the shelves. A time traveller can go back and say "This is the formula that works" the product is made in a couple of days and several years have been skipped.

That knowlege would be useful only if the time traveler showed up shortly before WD40 would have been invented anyway.

That knowlege by itself would be useless in the stone age, or even Medieval Europe.

It's not enough to know the formula for WD40, you have to know how to produce each of the ingredients from raw materials, how to find and extract the raw materials, how to refine the raw materials into the needed ingredients, what tools you need to for each step in the process, how to make those tools, how to make the tools needed to make the tools...

Unless you get dropped into a society that already has all the necessary predecessor knowledge, knowing the "formula" for WD40 is useless.

Could a time traveler accelerate the development of technology? Yes, but not to the degree you are imagining.

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solitude 🚫

@Dominions Son

Could a time traveler accelerate the development of technology? Yes, but not to the degree you are imagining.

I seem to recall a story here about a young man of a native American heritage, whose parents brought him up with a huge variety of skills, ready to be cast back in time in order to change the course of history. Preposterous, of course, but much less suspension of disbelief than is required for many stories here! (Sorry, can't recall name ofstory, or author.)

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NC-Retired 🚫

@solitude

https://storiesonline.net/s/15868/spirit-quest

NC-Retired 🚫

@solitude

Another time travel accelerated technology development tale by John Wales. 3/4 million words. Premium 'cause John's been gone many years.

https://storiesonline.net/s/50903/proeliator

This one better illustrates @Pixy's contention about one person boosting the rate of change.

NC-Retired 🚫

@Dominions Son

Thank you! Could not have said it better!

It's not enough to know the formula for WD40, you have to know how to produce each of the ingredients from raw materials, how to find and extract the raw materials, how to refine the raw materials into the needed ingredients, what tools you need to for each step in the process, how to make those tools, how to make the tools needed to make the tools...

Unless you get dropped into a society that already has all the necessary predecessor knowledge, knowing the "formula" for WD40 is useless.

Could a time traveler accelerate the development of technology? Yes, but not to the degree you are imagining.

awnlee jawking 🚫

@Pixy

The discussion is on how a time traveller will effect the speed of technological advance with the knowledge they posses.

This is an argument that nobody can win since, unless someone has a time-machine and a willing guinea pig, there's no scientific way to test it.

Knowing what's possible might facilitate developing new, improved technology that's actually better or simpler to manufacture than what the time-traveller is familiar with because they're unconstrained by commercial competition.

AJ

awnlee jawking 🚫

@Grant

It's all well and good knowing what's needed to make a finished car, but then you need all of the components that go into that finished car.

Oddly enough, there's something of a fad for making modern objects out of retro technology. For example, I seem to recall an article about cars made with wooden bodies in India.

AJ

samt26 🚫

@Dominions Son

You are so very right. And most people don't realize how far away in skills and knowledge 1850 is from today.

Pixy 🚫

@NC-Retired

Poured cement is not usable in 24 hours

Umm, depends on the cement. The British army uses poured cement that cures so quickly you can land a fighter plane on it within ten minutes and fully laden cargo planes within the hour.

As to time travel and people dragging the dark ages into even darker ages within a year or two. Well, one of the major inhibitors to technological progress is actually knowing whether or not the technology is even possible. Naysayers have been one of the biggest hindrances to technological innovation and continues to be so. In fact, one of the biggest hindrances in human history was/is actually religion.

Human history has also proved that once humans know something is possible, nothing stops it's adoption. Various country's in the world have 'invented' something and once the rest of the world finds out, adoption is very fast. Whether it be shipbuilding or Chinese 'black powder'.

A person transported back in time from present day is going to know flight is possible and the rough mechanics of it, so all they have to do is create the manufacturing process. How quickly that is done, depends on the knowledge base of the time traveller.

Humans are very adaptable and given the tools, they can achieve much in very little time.

But that society is not going from early bloomery iron that produces a few pounds of pig iron to furnaces that produce tons of steel in just 2-3 years

Nothing about that process is inherently difficult. In fact, many materials and ores were discovered before humanity worked out a use for them. If given a mental leg up by, say a metallurgist from today, I would reckon that you are right in being sceptical that your quote would be achieved in 2-3 years. It's more likely to be done in months, not years, because you are skipping all the theory, all the failed experiments, the derision from other 'academics' of the time, the continual claims of "It's not possible", the self doubt, the doubt that the product is even worth producing in the first place.

A perfect example of this is Da Vinci. He created designs whose conversion from parchment to reality was only hindered by derision, ignorance and a lack of money. Many of his designs never saw the light of day because the society of the time saw no use for them, nor could they comprehend the use for his ideas. Flight? What a preposterous idea! Humans have no need to be able to fly through the skies like a bird.... Quite.

What could have been if some of his 'imaginations' were actually constructed and he saw that his ideas were actually possible. What would he have gone on to design? With hindsight, we now know that many of his designs were theoretically accurate and even possible, if the society's technological level had been on par with his genius.

Like I said, one of the biggest drags on technological innovation has been ignorance. Whether it's been because the Earth was flat, or that one nuclear device would set the world on fire. Which was a big concern before the test of the first nuclear bomb.

The next biggest drag to technological advancement is protectionism. We have stayed on many technological levels long past what we should have, because companies and individuals bought up rival, superior technology and sat on it to maximise their own profits. This still goes on today.

Interestingly, the door swings both ways. We like to think of ourselves as 'technologically advanced' yet we still can't agree on how the pyramids were built, or Stonehenge. Or how Roman concrete self repaired and continues to do so to this day.

ginverse 🚫

@solreader50

I don't think accuracy is necessary, but consistency is important, you can't have something in Chapter 5 that contradicts something in Chater 2.

Also introducing something or someone into a story that breaks the rules and all established canon of the story, I personally find with stuff like this is it once it highlights and inconsistency you find more and more parts where it does not work. And it opens up so many more question which don't make sense.

irvmull 🚫
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@solreader50

Some are expecting the time traveler to quickly have Barney and Betty Rubble riding in a Tesla lubricated with WD40, while surfing the internet on their cell phones,
- vs -
others are willing to accept that riding in 4-wheeled wagons lubricated with animal fat, communicating by telegraph, and maintaining health due to proper diet, sanitation, and infection control would be a significant step forward in civilizing the natives.

After all, many people in parts of the world are currently living that way, and consider themselves to be "civilized".

If I were the time traveler, I couldn't build a Tesla, even though I understand how they work.

I couldn't formulate WD40 - and really, wouldn't bother to try, since a more universal lubricant would be more useful.

I don't have to know the components of modern BMW brake linings in order to know how brakes work. Bertha Benz invented the first brake linings back in 1888, and had a shoemaker make some out of leather.

I don't know how to refine petroleum. But every hillbilly 'round these parts can make shine, and the undrinkable stuff can be used for fuel.

IOW, if you didn't sleep thru middle school in the 1950's or '60's, you probably know enough technology to boost some cave folks into the early 20th century.
Recent college graduates with gender-studies degrees, maybe not.

No one needs to know the formulas for coefficient of friction in order to observe that rolling big blocks of stone on round logs is easier than just pushing them thru the sand. And you can bet those Egyptians who saw the logs in use went home and bragged about it. Pretty soon, everybody knew.

The overly-educated often make the mistake of believing that unschooled means unobservant.

I would say that - if you could eliminate the problem of superstition/religion, which has always been nothing more than a means of controlling the masses for personal power and profit - bringing a stone-age group up to a mid 1800's lifestyle would be possible.

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Grant 🚫

@irvmull

I don't have to know the components of modern BMW brake linings in order to know how brakes work. Bertha Benz invented the first brake linings back in 1888, and had a shoemaker make some out of leather.

And that is one of those steps along the way to producing the type of brakes we have today.

I don't know how to refine petroleum. But every hillbilly 'round these parts can make shine, and the undrinkable stuff can be used for fuel.

Fuel isn't all that's needed to run an engine- lubrication is also required so that it continues to run for more than a few minutes.

The overly-educated often make the mistake of believing that unschooled means unobservant.

And the less educated often make the mistake of disregarding the impact of the knowledge of those they consider to be overly educated actually has on their lives.

I would say that - if you could eliminate the problem of superstition/religion, which has always been nothing more than a means of controlling the masses for personal power and profit - bringing a stone-age group up to a mid 1800's lifestyle would be possible.

I haven't seen anyone say is not it's possible, but the time frame for it to occur with the knowledge of a single person driving it being proposed is completely unrealistic- and that's going from a society that already has steel to the starting point of the industrial revolution (mid 1700's).
Going from stone-age to the mid 1700s, that person would have to have a very, very long life.

Grey Wolf 🚫

@solreader50

To me, this depends on the type of story, the expectations of the genre, and the expectations the author sets for the reader.

For instance, in hard SF, things had better make sense, not violate known physics without a solid explanation, etc. In softer SF, things vary. The author is free to say 'new discovery X shows that theory Y is wrong in these special cases' as long as they can make it work plausibly.

On the other hand, if you're writing in many genres (action, Western, etc), it may be the case that guns hold infinite bullets - or that they don't. Travel time from point A to B might be waved away or might throw the reader off ('What - they made it from Kansas City to Abilene in three days?! In 1867?! What trash!').

I haven't read the story you're reading, but it would likely throw me off to have it set in nominally 'the real world' but with events not plausibly 'real.' That said, if the dates are 'background,' I might not notice how ridiculously fast the ship moved.

For my own story, there are a few large exceptions to 'known reality.' It's a do-over and, as part of that, backward-in-time reincarnation (across universes) is possible. Since it's a different universe, there are no worries about violation of causality (unlike the usual do-over - many leave that unsaid).

Aside from that, though, things are intended to be either consistent with our universe or inconsistent in ways explained by it being an alternate universe (mostly people who do not exist, or exist in very different forms, in the new universe). The roads are the same; the time it takes for someone to get from A to B is the same.

If I screw that up, I expect someone to complain, and I would intend to fix it if it wasn't explainable by cross-universe difference.

On the other hand, vis-a-vis the long discussion of whether time travelers can bootstrap modern civilization out of pure knowledge and drive, I remember happily reading Leo Frankowski and enjoying it and not worrying a whit over whether it was plausible. The story only required willing suspension of disbelief - one I was willing to grant.

But had Frankowski arbitrarily decided his engineer's cannons could be made from tissue paper and beeswax, I would have rebelled. The story was moderately plausible given known technology and physics. Straying from that would have been a step too far.

Rodeodoc 🚫

@solreader50

When I see little inaccuracies in stories here I remind myself that (a) it's fiction, and (b) it's free.

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solreader50 🚫

@Rodeodoc

Message received and understood. And largely agreed with.

Paladin_HGWT 🚫
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@solreader50

Does this kind of lack of attention to detail annoy other readers or am I just being particularly anal tonight?

I expect Reasonable attention to detail(s). Not an "expert's" knowledge, but at least basic research from "open sources" or at least make it sound plausible.

For the above sailing, perhaps the distance from Norfolk, Virginia to Gibraltar is 2,732 nautical miles (totally made up, I am on my phone and can't switch screens without losing the post I am typing), and the write used "2,500" miles, that's tolerable. If they SWAG 20 knots per hour x 24 (not taking into account currents, prevailing wind, most voyages aren't in a straight line, etc., sure, close enough.

{actually 3,342 nautical miles according to Ports.com or 3,342 nautical miles / 3,846 'standard' miles / 6,189 km according to Air Miles Calculator .com airmilescalculator.com} {Both websites are Free, and useful, as well as relatively easy to use.}

{Interesting, to me, fact: on the open ocean larger vessels sail significantly faster than smaller vessels. There are numerous variables, but the gist is that a larger vessel makes better use of (stronger) winds. There are a lot of details; if you are interested look them up. Now in littoral waters, or certain specific circumstances...)

There are multiple sources a person may use to get the sailing distance, flight distance, or driving distance between various locations. You can just plot the total distance, or break it up into stages.

If a story had: "The character flew from Atlanta to Louisville in three hours aboard American Airlines flight 123. Fine.

A person might know: AA doesn't operate into Louisville, or in 2014 didn't fly there non-stop, or it is actually Flight 2239...

The facts, while interesting, are often irrelevant.

I know when US Army SF ODA's changed from three number designator to four number designators, and what they mean. (Special Forces Operational Detachment Alpha aka an "A-Team"). I am also aware of aberrations, for various reasons occurred. Some for administrative reasons, some for "Op Sec"

Related. Look up FUSAG (First US Army Group) General George S. Patton Jr.'s command on 6 June 1944...

(and yes, at that date Patton was a Lieutenant General, three stars. However, in many circumstances a Major General, Lieutenant General, etc. may be referred to as "General")

Finally.

And passing Gibraltar telling of how the British captured The Rock from the Germans in WW2. (Oh really!!!).

When a Character makes such a grievous mistake, I typically presume it is the Author's mistake. However, I am willing to believe it is the character that is mistaken.

Reminiscing is what has provoked this post. When I was attending university, and enrolled in ROTC, I chose from a list of required courses, a class on Counter-Terrorism (I figured it would be both interesting, and easy for me). The professor was from the College of Journalism... Among the numerous factual errors this professor asserted, was: WWII was fought between "the USA, N@zi Germany, Imperial Japan, and maybe the UK, vs. the USSR, France, and Communist China, and maybe Italy..." Lesser matters, but resulting in a bitter argument was the professor insisting that Guadalcanal was the "name" of the Panama Canal!!!

Every class session the professor and I went at it "Hammer and Tongs" I just wouldn't let outrageous inaccuracies stand! It is teh only class I ever Failed!

Despite being able to Document numerous issues, the professor had Tenure and I was a mere undergrad! At least ROTC dropped that particular course from the electives (and my grade in it was stricken from my ROTC standing). (Other ROTC students were in the class with me. Also, my "professor" of Military Science was flabbergasted that I was given zero points on a pop quiz when the Historical facts that I had put in my answers were different that the professor's opinions! Such as the aforementioned supposed alliance between the USA and N@zi Germany! My fellow ROTC students got that one wrong too...)

{Edited to correct several "keystroke" or spelling errors, and to add the correct distance ORF to GIB.}

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Dominions Son 🚫

@Paladin_HGWT

I expect Reasonable attention to detail(s). Not an "expert's" knowledge, but at least basic research from "open sources" or at least make it sound plausible.

Most of what I read is not set in the "real world". As far as details go, as long as it's internally consistent, it doesn't bother me.

Big Ed Magusson 🚫

@solreader50

From experience, one can get away with errors unless they're about guns or sports. Get a detail wrong about either one and your email will be flooded with comments.

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Michael Loucks 🚫

@Big Ed Magusson

From experience, one can get away with errors unless they're about guns or sports. Get a detail wrong about either one and your email will be flooded with comments.

I receive corrections for all manner of esoteric things (usually NOT sports or guns). Of course, a portion of those 'corrections' are themselves errors.

The Outsider 🚫

@solreader50

Yeah, I withdrew from a sociology class when the professor (who was so far left, he made Mao and Stalin look like conservatives) tried to tell my class that people who came home from Vietnam and claimed they were spit on by protesters were lying.

Considering one of those people was my UNCLE, I got out of that class as soon as possible…

LupusDei 🚫
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@solreader50

In one of my "works in progress" my first person narrator get into totally unnecessary historical asides that are intentionally "wrong" local urban legends about historical events and personalities (most potential English readers may have absolutely no knowledge about, such as whore chasing by Peter the Great that ended him expelled from RΔ«ga city when he tried to personally inspect fortifications incognito. To this day we have "his horseshoe" near a third story window in old city commemorating this run of shame. Well, he returned with the army a decade or so later (would have look up the dates) and again "personally" aimed first cannon shoots in what became long and brutal siege that killed over half of the citizens, but who remember that? He didn't breach the walls, eventually there was negotiated surrender that reinstated elevated rights of germanic nobility the Swedes had curbed in their educational reforms. More interesting, just a few years later he participated in unsuccessful firefighting when third edition of St. Peter's church burned down; what he ordered to rebuild was burned again in WW2 and copied in metal by Soviet authorities).

How I initially framed the work (allegedly intended for "One night in ____" writing event I saw those bits of legendary local history as world building, and being presented in-character wasn't worried about biases.

However, I'm fretting a bit about using currency that went out of circulation around 1994 in a nightclub that won't open before 1996... but that's intentional too.

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AmigaClone 🚫

@LupusDei

However, I'm fretting a bit about using currency that went out of circulation around 1994 in a nightclub that won't open before 1996... but that's intentional too.

I would say have the person accepting the bills do so reluctantly if that currency can easily be exchanged for the one in effect at the time of the story.

I know that the ability to exchange currency that is out of circulation with the current one can vary a lot between countries.

For example, in England, you might be able to exchange out of circulation currency with current currency at several banks on a one to one basis. In contrast in Brazil only collectors would be likely to want Cruzeiro Real bills (which went out of circulation after a short transition period in 1994) in 1996 or later.

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