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Escalation Boredom

awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

A 'cousin' whinge to accompany 'Is it just me' and 'Long Story Intimidation'.

I don't find stories engrossing when they follow this sort of format:

Chapter n: Protagonist fights big, bad enemy and gets ass-kicked, but somehow pulls a rabbit out of a hat and turns the tables.

Chapter n+1: Protagonist fights bigger, badder enemy and gets ass-kicked, but somehow pulls a rabbit out of a hat and turns the tables.

Chapter n+2: Protagonist fights biggerer, badderer enemy and gets ass-kicked, but somehow pulls a rabbit out of a hat and turns the tables.

Chapter n+3: Protagonist fights biggererer, baddererer enemy and gets ass-kicked, but somehow pulls a rabbit out of a hat and turns the tables.

etc.

I'm bored even writing about it!

AJ

Pixy ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

It's an easy mechanic to abide by. One that Marvel has been living by for a few years now.

Paladin_HGWT ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

I have a different take on "Escalation Boredom"...

Original story is very good, "believable" at least within the "world" of the story; challenges are to scale with the MC. Second story had a dramatic escalation of threat, yet the MC triumphs. Third story, the threat is "Epic" and it is not at all plausible for the MC to defeat such a threat without Deus ex Machina. Or the MC (or team) is "powered-Up" (often ridiculously so) and now the threat must be escalated too...

I preferred Louis L'Amour, Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, or Agatha Christie, and their characters that occur in multiple (dozens or more) books. Challenges varied, and yet were plausible. Louis L'Amour in particular would have dangerous gunfighters, or clever schemers, often circumstances would prevent the MC from just shooting a threat. Enviromental challenges were a staple of his books, and often a potentially more lethal threat to the MC.

Many stories here on SoL are much better than Hollywood "Blockbuster" franchises; in that they build not only in a plausible manner, but they are often a "rollercoaster" in that after a serious challenge, the characters often face a lesser issue, that none-the-less needs to be addressed. Not every problem needs to be "epic" to be engaging.

Grey Wolf in his Variation on a Theme series has his characters deal with threats of rape, then a comparatively minor contest for the student council, or electing a school board member, then taking one of many steps to a secure economic future, then a life threatening situation. Preparing for and engaging in debate contests is made engaging, and at times humorous, or dramatic, though clearly no lives are at stake. But state or national championships are consequential, and when well written are more engaging in some other Marvel movie where they "save the universe" in 90 minutes, again...

The Grim Reaper series is another great example of varied challenges that are engaging, and yet believable.

I believe a major reason that the story The Millionaire Next Door is so popular is that the challenges are plausible, yet engaging.

akarge ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

You just need to show in advance that you have the ability to pull Vorpal Bunnies out of your hat. That makes ameverything believable. ๐Ÿคช

Replies:   Radagast
Radagast ๐Ÿšซ

@akarge

Surviving the Vorpal Bunny is the trick.
Push rabbit back into hat in a panic.
Pull pin on Holy Hand Grenade of Antioch.
Remember the count.
Throw HHHGA into hat.
Slap hat back on head to contain explosion.
???
Profit!

Replies:   Grey Wolf
Grey Wolf ๐Ÿšซ

@Radagast

Five is right out!

whisperclaw ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

Some writers can pull it off better than others. You just described the Dresden Files books, but I and and many other people love the series. So like many things, it depends on the talent of the writer.

awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

Twiddle her nipples and she orgasms.
Lick her pussy and she orgasms again.
Suck her clit and she orgasms a third time.
Stick two fingers in and massage her G-Spot and she orgasms a fourth time.
Fuck her for thirty minutes and when she orgasms for the fifth time, she soaks the bed, her eyes roll into the back of her head and she passes out.

Sigh. I'm getting jaded.

AJ

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