@shaddoth1
Sigh. maybe I didnt succeed as well as I hoped.
That may seem so but I'm not sure you should feel that way. It's a very good story so far, it's just not what your current reading audience expected. So what, you may loose a few of them for now but you will gain a different set of readers that are not so into the "sword and sorcery" type. In the end you should end up with a bigger and more varied group of readers. Don't bother with the score either. It's over 8 and that's considered very good here on SOL. The few lower scores are probably from the "sword and sorcerer" fans that feel a little disappointed because of the lack of, well, sword and sorcery, not because the story is bad.
For me, I like it when an author broadens his horizon in different types of stories. It bodes well for the expectation of future good stories.