I've bene testing out ChatGPT for a few weeks and have spent many conversations discussing literature, song lyrics and my own writing. I'm trying to train it to be an editor and mentor but it has been programmed to be such a prude. Nearly any suggestion of sex, especially underage or non-consensual, brings out the red flags that hide the text lest someone sensitive be triggers.
I'm working on a short story that involves an older man (me) traveling to a professional conference and hooking up with a college girl who's still a virgin because she's nerdy and looks like she's barely hit puberty. But is she is brilliant and has a beautiful face.
Probably because she's eighteen and I've stressed how the protagonist will be very kind and respectful it hasn't objected very often when I submit passages for review, although it frequently feels the need to remind me about consent.
ChatGPT:
Overall, the story progression and dialogue seem to flow well, and the scene is nicely paced. The characters' conversation and interaction feel natural and engaging. Here are some additional notes:
The dialogue is effective in showing the characters' personalities, particularly Joe's friendly and welcoming nature and Maya's reserved and polite demeanor.
The description of the surroundings and the characters' appearance adds detail and helps set the scene.
The scene sets up the possibility of a romantic relationship between Joe and Maya without being too heavy-handed, which is a nice touch.
Me:
I made sure there was clarity of consent. Joe recognizes Maya's inexperience and will tell her that his goal as the more experienced partner is to take care of her.
ChatGPT:
It's good to hear that you have taken steps to ensure clarity of consent and that Joe recognizes Maya's inexperience. It's important for both partners to communicate openly and honestly about their boundaries and desires before engaging in any sexual activity. It's also essential for the more experienced partner to prioritize the comfort and safety of the less experienced partner. Remember to always respect each other's boundaries and be mindful of each other's needs throughout the experience.
It's important to note that there are ethical considerations when it comes to engaging in sexual activities with someone who is significantly less experienced or vulnerable. Even if there is clarity of consent, it's important to prioritize the well-being and comfort of all parties involved, and to ensure that the power dynamics in the relationship are healthy and balanced. It might be worth considering seeking out resources or guidance on how to navigate such situations in a responsible and respectful way.
It's also great that Joe wants to help Maya grow in her confidence and give her valuable experience that she can carry forward in her future relationships.
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It's difficult to resist the temptation to reply "Don't worry, she will go home well-fucked, in a post-coital euphoria" I don't want to get banned. It nearly flipped out on my when I asked it to critique the opening chapter of another wip where the fourteen year old girl is forcefully deflowered by her aunt's estranged husband.
It is fantastic at writing computer code based on verbal instructions.