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Cameos and Multiverses in your writings

Mushroom 🚫

Are there any others that can not resist having characters from another story making a cameo in later ones?

And not as any kind of major character, but more like a "blink and you miss it" kind of way. Like most of the Stan Lee appearances in Marvel movies.

I admit I love doing it, even if I am the only one that knows about it. For me, it was most obvious (to those that read "Okinawa") in "CBCG" when I had both Itsuko and Mike as well as Cheers make cameos in that story. And in Bohica, having a trumpet player in a jazz club named "Tiny", who I lifted from JiMC's "Lucky Tickets" series.

Am I the only perverse enough to do that, or do others slip in cameos they would like to share with us?

Switch Blayde 🚫

@Mushroom

Am I the only perverse enough to do that

Alfred Hitchcock beat you to it.

Replies:   Mushroom
Mushroom 🚫

@Switch Blayde

Alfred Hitchcock beat you to it.

LOL

I meant in here.

Replies:   Michael Loucks
Michael Loucks 🚫

@Mushroom

Are there any others that can not resist having characters from another story making a cameo in later ones?

I have had characters from works by ProfessorC show up in my canonical work, and characters from my work have shown up in his work. There are a few others who have included characters from my work as well (and Xalir included me!).

I wrote a 'cutting room floor' (i.e non-canonical outtake) where Warren and Sophia from Dance of a Lifetime make a cameo appearance in AWLL.

Replies:   Robin G. Lovell
Robin G. Lovell 🚫

@Michael Loucks

I wrote a 'cutting room floor' (i.e non-canonical outtake) where Warren and Sophia from Dance of a Lifetime make a cameo appearance in AWLL.

I seem to recall an unfinished story that starts out with the main character having just finished reading Dance of a Lifetime - which in that universe was a semi biographical novel of Warren and Sophia's lives until they won their gold medal.

awnlee jawking 🚫

@Mushroom

I admit I love doing it, even if I am the only one that knows about it.

22. NOT RESPECTING THE READER

AJ

Replies:   tendertouch
tendertouch 🚫

@awnlee jawking

AJ,

??? Not sure how you see that as not respecting the reader. He didn't say 'even though I'm the only one…', which would be disrespectful since it would imply the readers wouldn't see it.

Replies:   awnlee jawking
awnlee jawking 🚫

@tendertouch

I've just read 22. NOT RESPECTING THE READER from SB's link and actually it's saying the opposite - rather than telling the reader that something is four, the author should give them 2+2 and let them work it out for itself. However dropping Easter Eggs into stories isn't even giving the reader 2+2 so they have no chance of working out the relevance for themselves unless they're in on the joke. IMO that's another way of disrespecting the reader.

AJ

Replies:   Mushroom  tendertouch
Mushroom 🚫

@awnlee jawking

I've just read 22. NOT RESPECTING THE READER from SB's link and actually it's saying the opposite - rather than telling the reader that something is four, the author should give them 2+2 and let them work it out for itself. However dropping Easter Eggs into stories isn't even giving the reader 2+2 so they have no chance of working out the relevance for themselves unless they're in on the joke. IMO that's another way of disrespecting the reader.

However, that is also requiring one to know the reader is familiar with all other sources. I make no assumption that when I do so any reader is even familiar with the sources, and never do it in a way where that is required.

Much like the Guardian's of the Galaxy Christmas Special. One can enjoy watching it, and not even be aware of who Mark Hamill is or that he was in it.

And it also should not require the reader know, or that can detract from the story. Like if I had an appearance of a time traveling Daniel Eakins working with a computer named HARLIE. I bet 98% would have no clue what that was referencing, so should not be included as a major element. Even though the author that wrote those stories was constantly including such references in his works. But never in a way that those not familiar with the other words needed to know about them at all.

Replies:   Switch Blayde
Switch Blayde 🚫

@Mushroom

a computer named HARLIE. I bet 98% would have no clue what that was referencing

I don't believe that's what the author of that article meant. He was talking about showing rather than telling and trusting the reader's reading comprehension to "get it." So if you describe someone's tummy grumbling you trust the reader to know he's hungry rather than telling him he's hungry.

tendertouch 🚫

@awnlee jawking

So, you're saying that if you don't give the reader everything that they need to recognize/appreciate/understand all of the parts of the story, no matter how minor, you're disrespecting the readers?

I disagree. Authors/movie makers/artists/etc… have been dropping Easter eggs for a long time. Some artists show up in odd places in some of their paintings, directors make quick cameos in their films and authors have other characters make cameos, have acrostics or have other connections to either their works to others. They're fun little things to find but don't detract if not found.

Replies:   awnlee jawking
awnlee jawking 🚫

@tendertouch

Authors/movie makers/artists/etc… have been dropping Easter eggs for a long time. Some artists show up in odd places in some of their paintings, directors make quick cameos in their films and authors have other characters make cameos, have acrostics or have other connections to either their works to others. They're fun little things to find but don't detract if not found.

I disagree. If you put Easter Eggs in a story, you are creating a distraction unless they're so obscure that no readers spot them. To create two classes of readers, ones who can spot your Easter Eggs and ones who can't, is disrespecting the ones who can't.

AJ

Replies:   Mushroom
Mushroom 🚫

@awnlee jawking

I disagree. If you put Easter Eggs in a story, you are creating a distraction unless they're so obscure that no readers spot them.

That is the difference between a cameo, and fan service.

If you cast Stan Lee as a bus driver where a character is supposed to be riding a bus, that is just a cameo. But if you make a big deal out of it and his being replaced in the scene no longer makes sense for the story, then it is fan service.

Hell, The Beatles did it all the damned time. Their works were constantly referencing other works of theirs. I have never heard anybody ever claim that was distracting or disrespectful.

Replies:   awnlee jawking
awnlee jawking 🚫

@Mushroom

If a story is improved by an Easter Egg, the author has serious problems and should take a long, hard look at themselves.

If a story isn't improved by an Easter Egg, then artistically there's no point, except as a gimmick to attract fans.

I'm sure some fans would sit through a movie of grass growing if Stan Lee were to drive past in a bus from time to time. But those fans wouldn't remember the movie as a good one.

AJ

Replies:   tendertouch
tendertouch 🚫

@awnlee jawking

I'll leave it at this.

Some fine artists have disagreed with you over the years. I'll trust their take on the subject since they so obviously know what they're doing. I don't know this personally, but I've read that Stephen King does this with every, single book he writes. If think I'll give precedence to his opinion (and Lewis Carrol's, Poe's, etc…) when it comes to writing.

Replies:   awnlee jawking
awnlee jawking 🚫

@tendertouch

At the end of the day, everyone here writes the stories they want to write. It's a suitable platform for harmless experimentation.

The authors you mention were good writers. Was it because of their gimmicks or despite it?

AJ

Marius-6 🚫

@Mushroom

I have paused posting my "epic" story A Sixth Generation Cowboy and a Third Generation Whore; set in Colorado. I won't post until I complete the "first book" I have learned some lessons. One is that instead of trying to write such a huge story, instead write a number of shorter stories in a Series.

(I started writing before I knew about SOL. I started posting to get feedback, and to motivate me to complete the story... Then a heart attack, being forced into assisted living, no internet access for my laptop, Covid-19, etc.)

I have a number of short stories, never posted, many incomplete. I have been re-writing some. Sometimes I have altered the characters (some of whom were quite similar) to create several series set in different locations (Colorado, Washington State, Tennessee/Kentucky, Texas, and Florida). There are some significant similarities, so, I have plotted out some cross-overs.

Rather than "create" a new minor character, I am using one or more characters from another series in minor roles. It is not necessary for all readers to realize a minor character in a particular story may be a more important character in another story or series. These could be considered "Easter Eggs" but they make sense. Many of the characters are veterans of the US (and other) armed forces; quite a few participated in special operations. While more than 100,000 people have participated in "special operations" since September 11th 2001; actual "Operators" are a much smaller number. It is unlike that you'd "know" everyone. However, it is likely that you'd "know a Guy, who Knows a Guy..."

It is interesting that you posted this topic. I have recently been doing some editing to "insert" a couple of characters from one series into another story in a different series.

Pixy 🚫
Updated:

@Mushroom

I've been doing it for decades here (if anyone noticed, they haven't said). The last few years I've moved on to throwing in readers who comment.

Edit: But then again, no-one remarked on the fact that I wrote a BDSM story, marked it as such, and then (intentionally) called the main characters Scott and Mary...

ystokes 🚫

@Mushroom

I have read a few stories that refenced Duelwriter's Florida Friends in a roundabout way.

Grey Wolf 🚫

@Mushroom

I have a blink-and-you'll-miss-it reference to a well-regarded SoL series in one of my books. Specifically, a minor character mentions a fictional town that's central to the other series. Perhaps, in my alternate universe, the town isn't fictional - but that doesn't imply that the other series' characters exist in mine.

I've got another (rather different) nod to another SoL story coming up in a while - a character nonchalantly references (broadly) the premise of the other series.

anim8ed 🚫

@Mushroom

Ernest Bywater has many stories with references from other stories and from his own. Most often that I noted were references to the Florida Friends Universe. There may be others as well.

I enjoy easter eggs in stories when I find them. I don't go looking for them and it doesn't detract from my enjoyment of a story. My personal opinion is most are not designed to be an easter egg to be found by the reader but more a tribute to other writers the author admires/respects.

Replies:   ystokes
ystokes 🚫

@anim8ed

My personal opinion is most are not designed to be an easter egg to be found by the reader but more a tribute to other writers the author admires/respects.

I agree, as the only way the reader would catch the egg is if they read the other story. EB was sneaky by just saying he took a charter plane that was covered in funny cartoons.

Replies:   Paladin_HGWT  anim8ed
Paladin_HGWT 🚫

@ystokes

EB was sneaky by just saying he took a charter plane that was covered in funny cartoons.

I saw that, but I did not recognize the link you seem to be referencing.

In the late 90's and for a bit after September 11th 2001, I had duties that frequent resulted in going to BFI (Boeing Field International) in Seattle {the regional airport is SeaTac a couple of miles to the south; BFI is where the Boeing corporation has some of their aircraft fly off to customers, or come in for special services. Also, UPS, Fed-Ex, DHL, and other cargo airlines and charter flights operate from.}

Several UPS and other Charter aircraft had "cartoons" on them for various promotional activities. In particular there was "cartoonish" artwork on the 767 that flew the whale to its new home. There were more than a dozen various aircraft that had "cartoonish" artwork (as opposed to "traditional" "Nose Art" (on war planes) or "Tail Art") I just supposed it was just something EB had seen. It seems to be rare, but since I have seen it on dozens (out of thousands of similar aircraft), I just figured it was a "Hat Tip" to "Plane Watchers" who might have noticed such a rarity...

anim8ed 🚫

@ystokes

EB's Runaway! Chapter 5 is mostly the MC interacting with a number of people from Dual Writer's Florida Friends Series.

Dicrostonyx 🚫

@Mushroom

Wizard did a major crossover with Russell Hosington. So much so that there's a Series page on SOL that has all the Trailer Park & Wynter stories in one place.

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