On perusing the story's title and description, readers unfamiliar with BarBar's excellent 'Bec' series are likely to give this a miss, or give up after the first chapter. And at first it is hard to see where the story is going. But now it seems to be settling down nicely into a hybrid of 'Bec' and A.A. Nemo's also excellent 'Jacob's Granddaughters'.
If you're looking for something a bit different, give it a try. I'm certainly not regretting it.
AJ