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herndon52 ๐Ÿšซ

According to theology, demons and other denizens of hell can and do escape from hell. These are the creatures that have become folklore and legend in our histories. Trolls, ogers, werewolves, vampires etc. Suppose a demon (one of the most dangerous forms of demon that can shape change and lives and travels in the shadows) escaped because he was tired of living in that type of existance that he must in hell.

While he doesn't want to continue to kill and drain the life essence from his victims in order to survive, he will when he must. Choosing to select his victims from among those that prey on society.

This MAY be a good idea (or not) I really don't know how this would be accepted.

Replies:   joyR  Reluctant_Sir
joyR ๐Ÿšซ
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@herndon52

According to theology, demons and other denizens of hell can and do escape from hell.

By 'escape' do you mean their captors fail in their duty? If so, who are those captors? I can't imagine anyone trusting the denizens of hell to police themselves...

If hell is not guarded then it is hardly an escape, judging by the numbers claimed, the exit must by now be a well trodden path.

(Edited because predictive text hates me.)

Replies:   herndon52  Tw0Cr0ws
herndon52 ๐Ÿšซ

@joyR

When I say escape, it is because exiting Hell is not an easy task. There is a "wall" , so to speak, separating Heaven, hell, and earth (according to biblical teaching). and there are those who are "bound" not able or allowed to escape, i.e Satan and those sentenced to Hell by God. So yes, there are Guards, walls and I am sure, pursuers.

Replies:   joyR
joyR ๐Ÿšซ
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@herndon52

So yes, there are Guards, walls and I am sure, pursuers.

If that is the case, as I asked earlier, who are those guards and persuers? I've never read or heard of a heavenly recruiter seeking volunteers to walk the walls of hell.

Then again whilst hell might be well populated, at present heaven is almost empty (according to biblical teaching), so it would seem unlikely a recruiter would have much success.

Replies:   herndon52  MrCokeDrinker
herndon52 ๐Ÿšซ

@joyR

According to theology, Angels are the guards of Hell. That has taken a bit more research than anticipated due to finding which of the different types of angels have that duty. Each type of heavenly being has a distinct purpose. It was something I was thinking of for a storyline.

Replies:   joyR
joyR ๐Ÿšซ

@herndon52

That has taken a bit more research than anticipated due to finding which of the different types of angels have that duty.

Perhaps your research has revealed why hell needs guarding? If god is all knowing, all seeing and omnipotent, as well as being the only one to cast anyone into hell, (which he created) why is escape considered possible? It should not need to be guarded.

StarFleet Carl ๐Ÿšซ

@joyR

If god is all knowing, all seeing and omnipotent,

To quote the master of science fiction:

God is omnipotent, omniscient, and omnibenevolent - it says so right here on the label. If you have a mind capable of believing all three of these attributes simultaneously, I have a wonderful bargain for you. No checks, please. Cash and in small bills.

herndon52 ๐Ÿšซ

@joyR

Actually God didn't create Hell (or I can find nothing to say it. He created Heaven and Earth.) He USES Hell as a prison for the doomed souls. It needs guarding to prevent DEMONS from escaping. God DOES NOT have rule over Hell. Satan does and ONLY Satan is bound there.

Replies:   joyR
joyR ๐Ÿšซ

@herndon52

Actually God didn't create Hell (or I can find nothing to say it. He created Heaven and Earth.)

Try google... Lots of result, widely varying opinions between churches, of course.

However, almost all agree that, "in the beginning there was nothing". So, either god created hell, or to pre-existed, which would mean there wasn't 'nothing' to begin with.

Next is might be worth your reading a bible, it seems that hell was created by god to punish the devil when he was cast from heaven. So it seems the devil isn't the prison governor, more prisoner #1.

Please note these are not my options, they are taken from the bible and church teaching. Not that I care about the history of anyone's imaginary friend.

He USES Hell as a prison for the doomed souls.

What/whose doomed souls..??

PotomacBob ๐Ÿšซ
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@joyR

Next is might be worth your reading a bible, it seems that hell was created by god to punish the devil when he was cast from heaven. So it seems the devil isn't the prison governor, more prisoner #1.

Where is that found in the Bible, please?

Replies:   Argon  joyR
Argon ๐Ÿšซ

@PotomacBob

I got inspired and popped the Dogma DVD into the player. I'll let you know if anything comes out of my research!

joyR ๐Ÿšซ
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@PotomacBob

Where is that found in the Bible, please?

It seems that;

There is a common misconception that Satan is in charge of hell and that he and his demons live there and use their pitchforks to torment souls for eternity. This concept has no basis in Scripture whatsoever. In fact, Satan will be one of the tormented in the lake of fire, not the tormentor (Revelation 20:10).

It quotes Rev 20:10 as;

and the devil who had deceived them was thrown into the lake of fire and sulphur where the beast and the false prophet were, and they will be tormented day and night forever and ever.

Source (Just one of many)

Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@joyR

So, either god created hell, or to pre-existed, which would mean there wasn't 'nothing' to begin with.

Or Lucifer(AKA Satan), the most powerful of the archangels, created it as a base of operations for his revolt against god that got him imprisoned there in the first place.

awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@joyR

Not that I care about the history of anyone's imaginary friend.

When I had my putative chat with God earlier this year, she claimed she created our universe. I didn't get to ask about Heaven and Hell but She said there were no (other) supernatural beings, which I interpreted as excluding the possibility of angels and demons and vampires and multiple gods.

She also said She didn't create humans - we evolved naturally within Her universe.

AJ

Replies:   joyR
joyR ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

She said there were no (other) supernatural beings,

Ok, so in that case, why waste a commandment ordering your followers with "You shall have no other gods before Me." ?? If none existed, that commandment would be pointless.

ps

Have you given Marvel Comics the good news?

awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@joyR

Have you given Marvel Comics the good news?

What???? You mean Marvel's superheros aren't real?

AJ

Replies:   joyR
joyR ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

What???? You mean Marvel's superheros aren't real?

Relax..!! They are as real Santa Claus... :)

Replies:   StarFleet Carl
StarFleet Carl ๐Ÿšซ

@joyR

Relax..!! They are as real Santa Claus... :)

Which, in the multi-verse theory, means VERY real.

I'm just not sure I'd like to live in the universe. Or the DC universe, either. Not if I wasn't one of the super heroes.

Replies:   joyR  awnlee jawking
joyR ๐Ÿšซ

@StarFleet Carl

Not if I wasn't one of the super heroes.

Ok.

Good news..!! You are a Superhero in your multiverse.

Bad news.. Your character was deemed 'offensive' by the PC brigade.

StarFleet Carl ๐Ÿšซ

@joyR

Bad news.. Your character was deemed 'offensive' by the PC brigade.

Why is that any different than this universe?

I live deep in the heart of deplorable country. God, the Flag and Country, and Guns to defend the first three are our motto here. You don't see Antifa protesting here - the Redneck Brigade would kick their whiny little asses back up inside their mommies bellies. We're a Constitutional Carry state, and we've got lots of open ground and front end loaders to take care of the remnants of the PC brigade. We'll pray for you because you're gay, but we won't beat you up because of it. We'll jump in a swollen river to save you, because waiting for the fire department may take too long. We'll give you a hand up, not a hand out. The color of your skin doesn't matter, it's the integrity in your heart that does.

And we despise liberal, communist, democrat pussies - but I repeat myself.

Replies:   joyR
joyR ๐Ÿšซ

@StarFleet Carl

Why is that any different than this universe?

Was it meant to be?

awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@joyR

Bad news.. Your character was deemed 'offensive' by the PC brigade.

Cis Man, who slaves away keeping the world running so everyone else can sit around bitching about how hard their lives are being members of minorities.

How's that for political incorrectness? :)

AJ

Replies:   Michael Loucks  joyR
Michael Loucks ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

How's that for political incorrectness? :)

Perfect!

My favorite SOL complaint so far - I write a explicitly religious story with clear identification, and I'm told that I should remove the religious parts because the reader doens't like them. ๐Ÿคฆ๐Ÿปโ€โ™‚๏ธ

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awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@Michael Loucks

My favorite SOL complaint so far - I write a explicitly religious story with clear identification, and I'm told that I should remove the religious parts because the reader doens't like them.

Unbelievable!

My own brief foray into religious stories has elicited two principal types of feedback - hilarity at my lack of religious knowledge and requests for more stories involving Satan.

AJ

Replies:   joyR
joyR ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

My own brief foray into religious stories has elicited two principal types of feedback - hilarity at my lack of religious knowledge and requests for more stories involving Satan.

Mine attracted a devout catholic intent on saving my soul via vitriolic feedback, used to brighten my mornings reading the latest rant. Gave up eventually, seems I'm beyond redemption. (Or just ask too many awkward questions).

:)

joyR ๐Ÿšซ

@Michael Loucks

My favourite SOL complaint so far - I write a explicitly religious story with clear identification, and I'm told that I should remove the religious parts because the reader doesn't like them.

Somebody needs to start a thread where authors can post 'comments' received. To be fair, without mentioning who made them.

Replies:   Keet
Keet ๐Ÿšซ

@joyR

Somebody needs to start a thread where authors can post 'comments' received.

Oooh, that's a big can of worms. I like the idea :D

Replies:   joyR
joyR ๐Ÿšซ

@Keet

Oooh, that's a big can of worms. I like the idea :D

Ever had a day when you can't see a can of worms without opening it..? I have a lot of those days...

I actually think it would be a good idea, not because it would hold the commenter up to ridicule because they should NOT be identified. What it would do, apart from providing a few wry grins, is demonstrate to other, perhaps newer or more sensitive authors, that they are not alone in receiving unwelcome, visceral, or just plain weird comments.

Replies:   Keet
Keet ๐Ÿšซ

@joyR

What it would do, apart from providing a few wry grins, is demonstrate to other, perhaps newer or more sensitive authors, that they are not alone in receiving unwelcome, visceral, or just plain weird comments.

I just can't imagine what kind of person it is that sprouts profanities at authors that provide stories for free and warn before about the possible squicks so they can avoid them. Must be people with IQ's the same as their shoe size;)

Replies:   joyR
joyR ๐Ÿšซ

@Keet

Must be people with IQ's the same as their shoe size;)

I doubt it, it's unlikely they could manage any great feats...

joyR ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

How's that for political incorrectness? :)

It's a good start, but I'm sure you can do better.. :)

awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@StarFleet Carl

I'm just not sure I'd like to live in the universe. Or the DC universe, either. Not if I wasn't one of the super heroes.

It seems to be a meme that the superheroes are supposed to be the best at their superpowers, yet every story seems to turn up a superior supervillain who metaphorically kicks sand in the superhero's face until the tables are turned via a deus ex machina.

AJ

awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@joyR

Ok, so in that case, why waste a commandment ordering your followers with "You shall have no other gods before Me." ?? If none existed, that commandment would be pointless.

Just in case that was a serious question, God said that she'd provided no input into human religions. If true, that would mean the commandments are a purely human invention.

I have no idea whether my experiment really did result in responses from God. I was an agnostic beforehand, I'm still an agnostic. Still, there were no apparent inconsistencies in the replies so they were MIST-compliant.

AJ

Replies:   joyR
joyR ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

If true, that would mean the commandments are a purely human invention.

Weird. The commandments are the only 'words of god' in the entire bible that are said to be written by him. So you'd think the commandments would be taken as commands, to be followed exactly, without 'interpretation', apparently not.

awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@joyR

I'm not a scholar of the Abrahamic religions, but there are plenty of arguments about the wording of the commandments, their intentions, and even how many there are.

AJ

Replies:   joyR  richardshagrin  Radagast
joyR ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

I'm not a scholar of the Abrahamic religions

Makes two of us.

richardshagrin ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

wording of the commandments, their intentions, and even how many there are.

I like the story there were 15 but Moses dropped one of the 3 tablets and it broke, so he only had 10 to announce.

Replies:   joyR
joyR ๐Ÿšซ

@richardshagrin

I like the story there were 15 but Moses dropped one of the 3 tablets and it broke, so he only had 10 to announce.

Not to mention that he came back down the mountain on a Triumph, not a Harley... :)

Replies:   Michael Loucks
Michael Loucks ๐Ÿšซ
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@joyR

Not to mention that he came back down the mountain on a Triumph, not a Harley... :)

If we're going to get dumb Bible jokes, let's at least get them right! :-) From one of my (as yet) unpublished chapters:

And by the way, do you know that cars are mentioned in the Bible?"

"Cars?"

"Sure. God drove Adam and Eve from the Garden in a 'Fury'. And later, all the apostles were in one 'Accord'. Motorcycles, too - David rode his 'Triumph' out of Jerusalem."

"Oh stop!" Clarissa laughed. "Seriously?"

"Baseball and tennis, too!" I continued. "The story starts 'In the Big Inning' and later, Joseph served in Pharaoh's court."

"That's getting worse, Petrovich!"

"You know the toy 'Stretch Armstrong', right?"

"Stop it, Petrovich!"

"Moses tied his ass to a tree and walked into the desert."

"I'm going to kick YOUR ass if you don't stop, Petrovich!"

"One more. How do Orthodox Christians settle disputes?"

"I have no idea," Clarissa replied, clearly exasperated by the puns.

"With canons."

"One more and I'll crown you with many crowns!"

"Hah! Now YOU'RE doing it!"

"Shit! You really are a complete goofball!"

Just sayin' ๐Ÿคช๐Ÿคช๐Ÿคช

Radagast ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

You should see an argument between 2nd Amendment scholars for religious splitting of hairs and dancing upon heads of pins about the meaning of Iota.
Even SCOTUS had to play at it with the Heller case, with the right wing of the permanent ruling party claiming it was an individual right, but only as much of a right as they would personally approve of and not a bit more, while the left wing of the permanent ruling party claimed it was an individual right in regards to service to the permanent ruling party and therefore was infringeable in every way.
They all had potential careers as Talmudic scholars.

I've tried to read the Talmud. The one thing I took away from it is it sets out the immutable laws of God, then creates layers of interpretation that reverse those rules, which means a follower can do anything, as long as he pays a Talmudic Scholar to approve it.

Henry VI, Part 2, Act IV, Scene 2

herndon52 ๐Ÿšซ

@joyR

They are commands. Failure to follow them is what led to the Jews wandering the desert for a generation.

herndon52 ๐Ÿšซ

@joyR

Demons wish to escape from hell for the same reason immagrants want to come to the US, to get a better life. In fact I guess you could say they are the FIRST illegal immagrant

MrCokeDrinker ๐Ÿšซ

@joyR

According to some mythology, the Gates of Heaven are guarded by United States Marines, so Hell probably has something similar. I would have fun with that. Heaven is guarded by the souls of soldiers and military guys who died fighting for righteous causes, or believed their cause was just, while Hell get's mercenaries and adventures, who were not necessarily bad people, but they went to war for the wrong reasons, and thus guard hell, but are not entirely in hell, while they redeem their souls and prove their worthiness to go to heaven. Actual Nazis SS and War Criminals, rather they believed their cause right or were just in it to fight, or for money, go to hell regardless.

You could also argue that cops fit into this role as guards. Maybe a mid 20th century cop who looked away when the weak were being persecuted by society, or someone who mostly did his job right, but participated in shake downs back when those were still common police practice.

Replies:   joyR
joyR ๐Ÿšซ

@MrCokeDrinker

According to some mythology, the Gates of Heaven are guarded

If god exists, is omniscient and all powerful, WHY would heaven need guards..?

Replies:   Radagast
Radagast ๐Ÿšซ

@joyR

To keep out the riff raff, of course.
Also to condition the earthly believers to blind acceptance of heirachical social control.

Meet with a senior politician or civil servant.
If he wants to suppress you you are met by armed security and escorted to the presence.
If he wants to impress you you are met by a senior flunky and escorted to the presence.
If you are there to negotiate as a near equal then you pick up a pass at reception and go straight in.

Politicians would love to be God. They could skip options 2 & 3.

Replies:   joyR
joyR ๐Ÿšซ

@Radagast

To keep out the riff raff, of course.

What riff raff..?

Supposedly only those judged worthy can ascend to heaven. There is NO mention of any other access, secret passages, hidden staircases etc etc. So again, what riff raff...?

Tw0Cr0ws ๐Ÿšซ

@joyR

There is a claim that if you put one crab in a bucket you need to put a lid on it to keep the crab from escaping, but if you put a bunch of crabs in the bucket you don't need a lid since if one tries to get out the rest pull it back in.

Demons could easily be imagined to act that way.

So all it would take is a distraction and...

Replies:   joyR  awnlee jawking
joyR ๐Ÿšซ

@Tw0Cr0ws

There is a claim

A claim is enough...?

According to the scientific community a theory becomes proven fact if an experiment is designed that can be repeated by others and achieve the same results...

So, you might have a theory that spiders hear through their legs. Experiment: Place spider on desk, shout Boo..!! Spider runs away... Now Remove spiders legs, shout Boo..!! Spider does NOT run away. Therefore spiders hear through their legs.

It might work for crabs, but you'd need to define the type of crab, the dimensions of the bucket and the amount of water it contains. Not to mention the mental state of the crab and quantify its desire to escape.

Then again, basing the actions of demons on the suicidal tendencies of a bunch of crabs... hardly conclusive.

Personally I think you should have chosen lobsters, I LIKE lobsters but have always avoided catching crabs...

awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@Tw0Cr0ws

There is a claim that if you put one crab in a bucket you need to put a lid on it to keep the crab from escaping, but if you put a bunch of crabs in the bucket you don't need a lid since if one tries to get out the rest pull it back in.

I vaguely remember video evidence, although I can't remember the website.

AJ

Reluctant_Sir ๐Ÿšซ

@herndon52

I like the idea... and who cares what accepted theology has to say about the issue, we write fiction!

This has been banging around in my head since I read it the other day and I think it could be a fun story. If nothing else, it will go in the idea bank for later.

shinerdrinker ๐Ÿšซ
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Wow. This discussion turned from the topic just a bit, huh.

I actually remembered there was a TV show "Dead Like Me." People died and became Grim Reapers. They met up each morning in a diner to get their assignments. He gave them names, locations and time of death so they could remove their soul and just before the accident that would kill them and send them onto wherever the soul would remain for eternity. Mainly focuses on a recently killed girl who was killed by a toilet seat from the deorbiting Russian Mir Space Station.

I think it was like one season on Showtime.

Replies:   Keet
Keet ๐Ÿšซ

@shinerdrinker

Wow. This discussion turned from the topic just a bit, huh.

You're surprised? I thought it was a requirement here on the forum ;)

herndon52 ๐Ÿšซ

WOW....It seems I created a real debate with my story idea. While I didn't intend to create discord it is nice to see it without it devolving into name calling.

Beliefs are , I believe, a personally held thing. You worship God (in his many forms or names) in your own personal way or not (according to your belief). Man was given free will from God for a purpose after all.

Replies:   joyR
joyR ๐Ÿšซ

@herndon52

Man was given free will from God for a purpose after all.

Theist and sexist.

Unless you are acknowledging that women already had free will...?? :)

madnige ๐Ÿšซ

I'd like to flag up McAllister's Redemption by black coffee, a story that starts with an escape from Hell.

Replies:   Radagast
Radagast ๐Ÿšซ

@madnige

Thanks for the link. I've added it to my reading list on the basis that he approves of Heinlein and Zelaszney. I read Zelasney's Doorways in the Sand in Analog back in the 70s. A great story.

richardshagrin ๐Ÿšซ

free will

You have to pay a lawyer to get a will. There are no free wills.

Replies:   joyR
joyR ๐Ÿšซ

@richardshagrin

There are no free wills.

There are many free wills, albeit their given name is often William.

Tw0Cr0ws ๐Ÿšซ

Demons in a story will act any way the writer wants them to act.
They can feel free to take the writer to court if they don't like it, that is if they can stand to deal with lawyers. ;)

Replies:   Radagast
Radagast ๐Ÿšซ

@Tw0Cr0ws

You are assuming they aren't the lawyers.

I'm going to put in a plug for Volentrin's The Fallen.
An excellent story of angels and demons on earth.
https://storiesonline.net/s/47844/the-fallen

Replies:   Tw0Cr0ws
Tw0Cr0ws ๐Ÿšซ

@Radagast

There may be something to that.

The word Satan is not a name, it is a job title meaning prosecuting attorney.

Tw0Cr0ws ๐Ÿšซ

There is another reason so few make their way out physically.
If they are summoned they make a projection which is not their actual body and they cannot be killed, only banished which is painful and costly but not permanent. If they are physically present they can be killed and are really dead.

So the thing that keeps most of them in is not guards but fear of death.

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