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How to Indicate Laughter Without Using the word "Laugh?"

PotomacBob 🚫

How do you indicate laughter without using the word "laugh"? I'm looking for the phonetic spelling of the actual sounds people use when laughing. I've seen it rendered "Ha, ha, ha," but, to me, that is not a very close approximation of how people sound when they laugh.
I tried to figure out a way to search for it, but soon figured out I had to know how to spell it before I searched.
Anyone?

Replies:   joyR  Dominions Son  REP
joyR 🚫

@PotomacBob

I've seen it rendered "Ha, ha, ha," but, to me, that is not a very close approximation of how people sound when they laugh.

It might not replicate the exact sound of laughter but it is easily recognisable. Using a less well known replacement might well add confusion and thus destroy the humour.

My $0.02

Dominions Son 🚫

@PotomacBob

I've seen it rendered "Ha, ha, ha," but, to me, that is not a very close approximation of how people sound when they laugh.

1 Not everyone's laugh sounds the same. Personally, I tend to he he he rather than ha ha ha
2. Unless someone is sarcastically fake/slow laughing, I would do it without the commas. The commas imply a significant pause between the laughs.

REP 🚫

@PotomacBob

I searched on 'onomatopoeia words'. Some lists are better than others

Redsliver 🚫

You can always give every unique character their own laugh:

Zeehahahahaha!
Yohohohohoho!
Derishishishishi!
Goldigadigadigadiga!

Though, I think that only works for One Piece.

Generally, I use: I laughed, she laughed, or they laughed. And if I need to change the pitch there's chuckled, giggled, chortled, snorted, guffawed, cackled, without even getting into the sarcastically laughed, maniacally laughed, false-laughed, etc.

Though I do use '"Heh," she speech-tagged' for low energy tired laughing. I've used "Ha!" for exclamations of sarcasm but hahaha? not so much.

Replies:   Keet  awnlee jawking
Keet 🚫

@Redsliver

Generally, I use: I laughed, she laughed, or they laughed. And if I need to change the pitch there's chuckled, giggled, chortled, snorted, guffawed, cackled, without even getting into the sarcastically laughed, maniacally laughed, false-laughed, etc.

As a reader this gives me a good idea of the type of laughter without confusing me by having to interpret hahaha or hehehe.

Replies:   joyR
joyR 🚫

@Keet

without confusing me by having to interpret hahaha or hehehe.

hahaha = male laughter

hehehe = female laughter

:)

Redsliver 🚫

@joyR

hahaha = male laughter

hehehe = female laughter

hohoho = dom laughter. You have to be so top you're at the top of world to pull this off.

Replies:   joyR
joyR 🚫

@Redsliver

hohoho = dom laughter.

hohoho = prostitute laughter..??

Also, wouldn't dom laughter be higher pitched?? After all, when you listen to it through speakers, nothing comes out of the subs... :)

Replies:   beatingoffbob
beatingoffbob 🚫

@joyR

Yegads! Does this mean Santa Claus is a Dom?

Dominions Son 🚫

@beatingoffbob

Yegads! Does this mean Santa Claus is a Dom?

No, he's not a dom, he's a pimp. Ho ho ho.

richardshagrin 🚫
Updated:

@beatingoffbob

Santa Claus is a Dom?

I checked online. Yes.

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joyR 🚫

@beatingoffbob

Yegads! Does this mean Santa Claus is a Dom?

Mostly likely he is a sub as Mrs Claus is a Domme, who only lets Santa cum once a year...

Redsliver 🚫

@beatingoffbob

Of course he's a Dom. He's such a top, he's at the very top of the world.

Replies:   Vincent Berg
Vincent Berg 🚫

@Redsliver

Of course he's a Dom. He's such a top, he's at the very top of the world.

Uh, Dom's have no say someone's being a 'top' or a 'bottom', as that's a personal preference. Any Dom who insists on violating a Sub's kinks, is likely to lose them as a Sub.

awnlee jawking 🚫

@beatingoffbob

Does this mean Santa Claus is a Dom

If Santa Claus is Adom, was he tempted by Christmas Eve's apple?

AJ

richardshagrin 🚫

@awnlee jawking

Christmas Eve

Christmas Eve is December 24th. Since Adam came before Eve, Christmas Adam is December 23rd.

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son 🚫

@richardshagrin

Christmas Eve is December 24th. Since Adam came before Eve, Christmas Adam is December 23rd.

Since Adam came first, Eve probably ended up having to diddle herself.

Replies:   awnlee jawking
awnlee jawking 🚫

@Dominions Son

Christmas Eve cums twice - the whole of December 24th and the evening of December 25th.

AJ

Vincent Berg 🚫

@awnlee jawking

If Santa Claus is Adom, was he tempted by Christmas Eve's apple?

More precisely, he's awfully tempted by that nice 16-inch MacBook Pro that Eve just received from her boyfriend, who's not a Dom, by the way!

Replies:   joyR
joyR 🚫

@Vincent Berg

More precisely, he's awfully tempted by that nice 16-inch MacBook Pro that Eve just received from her boyfriend,

Now that makes perfect sense. Especially the bit that followed whereby Adam and Eve knew shame when they became PC and wore leaves, which died soon after installing thus requiring constant updates, not to mention bug fixes...

richardshagrin 🚫

@joyR

hehehe

Probably male. Shesheshe would be female.

Replies:   awnlee jawking
awnlee jawking 🚫

@richardshagrin

And bwaaahahaha would be bisexual.

AJ

Replies:   joyR
joyR 🚫

@awnlee jawking

And bwaaahahaha would be bisexual.

So is teehee transexual..?

And is teepee a result of jubilant watersports or a more 'in tents' humour..?

awnlee jawking 🚫

@Redsliver

And don't forget the expulsion through the nostrils of the beverage of the character's choice.

A former work colleague had a laugh that sounded like a rusty chainsaw.

My $0.00 worth.

AJ

Tw0Cr0ws 🚫

If they are Spanish speakers it would be jejeje or jajaja, J is pronounced in Spanish as H is in English

Switch Blayde 🚫

If they were country folks, it would be: HEE HAW

Vincent Berg 🚫

Generally, the whole 'Show, Don't Tell' movement revolves around authors showing what's physically happening, rather than having to state what someone is doing.

Thus, you shouldn't try to duplicate the explicit sounds, unless you've got your own sound studio and are willing to create a film. However, you can describe someone slapping their knee, falling off their chair, or chortling incessantly. It's often the physical actions that conveys what mere words cannot, and that's the entire basic of the 'Show Don't Tell' movement (otherwise known as 'writing').

Replies:   Switch Blayde
Switch Blayde 🚫

@Vincent Berg

Generally, the whole 'Show, Don't Tell' movement revolves around authors showing what's physically happening, rather than having to state what someone is doing.

I recently read a description of showing that I wish I had kept since it's one of the hardest things to define. It had something to do with living the story through the character.

So if you tell the reader the father is abusive, the reader isn't feeling it. But if you show the father being abusive (by his actions and dialogue) to his daughter (belittling her in front of her friends, beating her, locking her in a closet, etc.), the reader feels his abusiveness through the daughter. The author doesn't have to tell the reader he's abusive. The reader feels the daughter's pain. The reader is living the abusiveness through the daughter.

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