Please forgive this long introduction to my questions.
Generous Offers (2) is about Mike and his ladies (read: sluts) going on a cruise where open consensual adult activities are encouraged. On the cruise is a happily incestuous family. The parents explain how their family grew up that way because they want Mike to look after their four young adult children. (Business issues required the parents to leave the cruise early.)
They raised their family in a loft. After potty training, the children joined their parents in nudism at home. From babies their children watched their parents enjoying sex. At an early, unspecified age, Abby, their first born, tries to help with a pre-intercourse blowjob. She was turned down with, "when you are older." Abby said her sister also wanted to help. Her sister would have to wait longer. She got to help when she was older and yes, the sister had to wait longer. Actual ages are purposefully left to the reader's imagination.
Twin boys joined the family when Abby was still two. When the twins were ready for a regular bed the family had three beds. Dad & Mom, Abby & Jenny, James & Will.
SNIP FROM THE STORY
[The parents are telling Mike privately how their family became incestuous. The father finishes the telling:] "It was not much of a surprise when Abby and James switched beds. We smiled as we watched our children sharing the most pleasurable kind of familial love for the first time.
"It was a good thing we prepared our girls for the twins becoming sexually active. The girls were protected by a combination of birth control pills and IUDs.
"Soon we all shared intimate relations. For the past few years, almost every week each male was sexually active with each female – often multiple times. One day Jenny decided to go without sexual pleasure. We respected her wishes. She lasted that way for almost two weeks.
END SNIP
The twins are 18 in the story. At a few other places the adult children mention their family history.
ALL incestuous activity is "off screen." It's not the point of the story. If the story has a point at all, its Mike's 19yo ladies are spending a fraction of the inheritance they will soon get at age 21. And having the time of their lives doing spending it.
Story Description as planned:
Mike and his ladies take a clothing optional cruise. Open consensual adult activity is encouraged. Mike meets a happily incestuous family; their four young adult children join his ladies for adult fun with others.
At the end of the chapter before Mike learns about this family I include:
{ notice}
In the following chapter, parents talk about how their family became happily incestuous. There is no domination, coercion, or submission involved. To them, M/F sexual activity just feels good. Sisters with brothers and dad. Brothers with mom.
None of this becomes thematic. But it is mentioned in later chapters.
{ /notice}
My questions:
* Is the above notice enough of a warning for those who are triggered by incest?
* What incest tags should I check?
* Should I include "This is NOT a story about incest." in the story description?
[Side note]
My first cut on "Abby, their first born, tries to help with a pre-intercourse blowjob" had Abby taking over from her mother. I thought it was funny. Lazeez thought it had to go.
