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I asked chatGPT to write a story in the style of Bondi Beach

Bondi Beach 🚫
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Although the result is kind of plastic, chatGPT appears to have successfully incorporated elements of "Sarah's Honeymoon" (encounter on the beach) and "Swimming with Kate" (backstories).

FWIW: "Sam" is also the name of Buddy's sister in "California Central Valley Summer Heat." Nice to know JBB's stuff got read by the LLM elves.

Prompt: Write a story of young man meets young girl and they fall in love in the style of Joe Bondi Beach.

Story:

The first time he saw her, the tide was halfway out and the beach looked bigger than usual.

Sam had come down early with a coffee that was already going cold. The morning was one of those soft, gold ones where the ocean looked like brushed glass and nobody talked too loud. A couple surfers were already out, sitting on their boards like they had nowhere else in the world to be.

He liked mornings like that. They made life feel simple.

She arrived running.

Not jogging—running like she was late for something important, hair flying, sandals in one hand. She slowed only when she hit the sand, laughing at herself, slightly out of breath.

Sam noticed her because she stopped right in front of him.

"Is the water freezing?" she asked, like they already knew each other.

Sam looked at the ocean. Then back at her.

"Depends," he said. "How brave are you?"

She grinned.

"Not very."

He laughed and suddenly the morning didn't feel so quiet anymore.

Her name was Mia. She had just moved to town two weeks earlier and still got lost driving to the grocery store. She talked fast, like her thoughts were always racing each other.

Sam talked slower.

It worked.

They walked along the waterline while the waves curled up and disappeared around their feet. She told him about the city she left. He told her about growing up by the ocean and how he once tried to surf during a storm and nearly lost his board—and his dignity.

She laughed so hard she had to stop walking.

"Okay," she said finally, "so you're brave, but not smart."

"Exactly."

The sun climbed higher. The beach started filling with people, but somehow they stayed inside their own little bubble of conversation.

At some point she looked out at the water and said quietly, "You're lucky, you know."

"Why?"

"You get this every day."

Sam looked at the ocean the way you do when someone reminds you of something you've stopped noticing.

"Maybe," he said. "But today's better."

She tilted her head.

"Why?"

He shrugged.

"You showed up."

She didn't say anything for a second. Just smiled a small smile that felt bigger than the whole beach.

By late morning they were sitting in the sand, sharing the same melting ice cream from the little shop down the road.

By sunset they were still talking.

And by the time the sky turned pink and the last surfers paddled in, both of them had the quiet, certain feeling that life had just changed in a small but permanent way.

Sometimes love doesn't arrive like fireworks.

Sometimes it's just a girl running across the sand, a question about cold water, and two people deciding—without saying it out loud—to keep walking together. 🌊☀️💛

[Emojis added by chatGPT]

helmut_meukel 🚫

@Bondi Beach

Prompt: Write a story of young man meets young girl and they fall in love in the style of Joe Bondi Beach.

Methinks the AI didn't recognize Joe Bondi Beach as a name – therefore parsed beach as a required part of the story and located the story on a beach.

Sorry for you, JBB, not being recognized as an author by this AI.

HM.

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Bondi Beach 🚫

@helmut_meukel

Ouch!

~ JBB

Bondi Beach 🚫
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@Bondi Beach

Nope. Turns out ChatGPT knows who JBB is.

The principal characters in "Amélie" are Amélie, her foster brother Gérard, and Sandrine. The plantation they grew up on is "Sunrise."

The prompt said nothing about going to Oxford, Sandrine, or Captain Beauchamp, or that the novel is framed as a journal by Amélie. The prompt did not name the plantation.

Prompt: Tell a short chapter about Amélie and Gérard from the novel "Amélie" by "Joe Bondi Beach"

ChatGPT: Here is a short, original "chapter-style" vignette inspired by the characters from the novel Amélie by Joe Bondi Beach.

(It's a fresh scene, not a quote from the book.)

A Quiet Morning at Sunrise

The sea was calm that morning, the kind of calm that made the horizon look painted rather than real.

Amélie sat on the weathered steps of the veranda at Sunrise plantation, her journal balanced on her knees. She wrote quickly, as if afraid the wind might steal the thoughts from her mind before the ink could trap them.

Behind her, Gérard emerged from the house with a book tucked under his arm.

"You're writing about the sea again," he said.

"I'm writing about leaving it," Amélie replied without looking up.

Gérard leaned against the railing and gazed toward the distant water where their old ship once anchored. Their adventures with Captain Beauchamp already felt like stories from another lifetime.

"Oxford will be quieter," he said thoughtfully. "Less pirates."

Amélie finally closed the journal. "That's precisely what worries me."

Gérard laughed softly. "You'll find trouble anywhere, Amélie. You always do."

She stood and walked past him, the morning sun catching the salt in her hair. "Trouble?" she said. "No, Gérard. I prefer to call it curiosity."

From the road below came the sound of Sandrine approaching, humming a tune neither of them recognized. Gérard watched his foster sister stride toward the gate with that familiar determined spark.

Oxford, he suspected, had no idea what was coming.

And neither did they.

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@Bondi Beach

The question then is how did OpenAI acquire a license to the novel. Was it a purchase, an investment gift from Amazon, or was it part of a pirated data set like Books3?

edit: it's not in Books3, but maybe another dataset...

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Bondi Beach 🚫
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@Gauthier

The question then is how did OpenAI acquire a license to the novel.

Interesting, since they obviously had access to the text. In another query, ChatGPT said they couldn't give a complete answer (the name of a character) because it did not appear in the metadata or any published key words or tags. But its answer also implied that it had read the text of that other novel.

Maybe I should sue.

~ JBB

Replies:   Dominions Son  EricR
Dominions Son 🚫

@Bondi Beach

Maybe I should sue.

If you are serious, talk to a copyright lawyer.

EricR 🚫
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@Bondi Beach

Ask it "what do you know about the writer named Joe Bondi Beach". You'll find that it knows quite a bit about you. However, when I used your prompt to ask it to tell a story about Amelie and Gerard I got something quite generic, set in Paris. Is it possibly referencing text on your PC?

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@EricR

Is it possibly referencing text on your PC?

That's a really scary thought, but I don't think so. In the prompt I said specifically those two characters in the novel "Amelie" by Joe Bondi Beach. So my prompt specifically linked those two characters to a particular novel by Joe.

Now I'm wondering what they might have gotten up to in Paris!

~ JBB

Bondi Beach 🚫

@EricR

I asked it about Joe, not bad and all from published sources.

~ JBB

Switch Blayde 🚫

@Bondi Beach

I guess ChatGPT reads our stories on SOL and stores it in its database. But I don't think it reads our novels on ZBookStore or Amazon. I got this when I asked ChatGTP: "what do you think of Switch Blayde's writing?"

Switch Blayde (who also publishes as S. W. Blayde) is a niche online author best known for posting fiction on StoriesOnline and similar platforms. My take on the writing is mixed but interesting—here's a balanced view.

What works well 👍

1. Strong "show, don't tell" approach
Blayde explicitly says they try to write scenes cinematically—showing actions and emotions instead of summarizing them.
• Scenes are often very direct and visual.
• Characters' emotions are usually conveyed through dialogue and behavior, not narration.

2. Pacing and readability
A lot of readers find the stories:
• easy to read
• fast-paced
• structured more like episodic storytelling

3. Character-driven storytelling
The stories often focus heavily on relationships and interpersonal drama, which keeps readers engaged chapter-to-chapter.

Common criticisms 👎

These are things people in online writing communities often point out.

1. Heavy emphasis on explicit scenes
Blayde openly writes graphically described sex scenes and integrates them directly into the narrative.

For some readers:
• it's a feature
For others:
• it overpowers plot or character development

2. Repetition in descriptions
Because the stories are serialized, you sometimes see:
• recurring phrases
• repeated character traits or physical descriptions

3. Genre limitations
Most of the work stays within adult relationship fiction, which can feel formulaic if you read a lot of it.

Overall impression

If I had to summarize the style:
• Strengths: engaging, visual, easy to binge, character-focused
• Weaknesses: sometimes repetitive, explicit content dominates, not very literary

So I'd say Switch Blayde is a solid serial storyteller rather than a literary stylist. The writing is built for reader immersion and entertainment, not necessarily for complex prose.

✅ Good if you like:

• serialized fiction
• character-driven drama
• explicit adult storytelling

❌ Less appealing if you want:

• subtle prose
• complex literary themes
• tightly edited novels

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@Switch Blayde

But then I asked the same question about "S.W. Blayde" (which would be my novels, some of which aren't on SOL) and got this:

S. W. Blayde is a fairly niche writer, and opinions about his work vary a lot depending on what readers expect from fiction.

Overall style

His writing tends to have a few consistent traits:

1. Very "show-don't-tell" storytelling
Blayde explicitly says he tries to show events directly rather than summarize them—almost like a movie scene on the page. That means you often get very detailed scenes, including violence or sex, rather than implication.

2. Heavy adult content
Many of his books—like Sexual Awakening or The Breeder—blend plot (crime, romance, revenge, westerns, etc.) with explicit sexual content.
He positions this as part of the story rather than pure erotica, but it's still quite graphic.

3. Pulp / genre storytelling
A lot of his work falls into pulp-style genres:

• crime thrillers (e.g., the Lincoln Steele books like Death of a Hero)
• revenge narratives
• romance with dark themes

The focus is usually plot momentum and dramatic situations rather than literary prose.

Strengths readers often mention
• Fast pacing
• Direct, cinematic scenes
• Clear character motivations
• Willingness to tackle taboo or controversial topics

Common criticisms
• The explicit content can feel excessive for some readers
• Characters can be archetypal rather than deeply nuanced
• The prose style is straightforward rather than stylistically "literary"

My honest take

If someone likes:
• gritty pulp fiction
• revenge or thriller plots
• adult themes that are very explicit

then Blayde's work can be engaging.

But if someone prefers:

• subtlety
• literary prose
• character-driven psychological depth

they might find his writing a bit blunt or sensationalist.

Switch Blayde 🚫

@Switch Blayde

Many of his books—like Sexual Awakening or The Breeder—

The only place these two novels exist are on ZBookStore (Bookapy prior to ZBookStore) and Amazon KDP. How did ChatGPT read those novels?

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Dominions Son 🚫

@Switch Blayde

The only place these two novels exist are on ZBookStore (Bookapy prior to ZBookStore) and Amazon KDP. How did ChatGPT read those novels?

Did it? Or is it just relying on the publicly accessible descriptions?

Bondi Beach 🚫

@Switch Blayde

• The prose style is straightforward rather than stylistically "literary"

I think I'd take that as a positive. And I'm glad the bot gave you its honest opinion rather than what it thought you wanted to hear.

~ JBB

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Switch Blayde 🚫

@Bondi Beach

• The prose style is straightforward rather than stylistically "literary"

I think I'd take that as a positive.

I did take that as positive.

TheDarkKnight 🚫

@Bondi Beach

I tried both "write a story like ...: and "tell me what you know about ...", but the results pointed to a different "ThaDarkKnight. I didn't expect that the Great God AI would know me anyway, since my online presence is all on SOL, but I had to try.

How many other folks are going to try that today?

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Bondi Beach 🚫
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@TheDarkKnight

UPDATE: ChatGPT got its response to my prompts by reading all the tags and metadata. I reviewed the Lulu listings for "Amélie" and "Goddess" and saw that chat's descriptions appeared to be drawn from the tags and item description. It's not clear that it drew anything from the text itself.

I'll try giving it a puzzle that is not described in the tags or metadata.

~ JBB

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@Bondi Beach

OK, ChatGPT is officially busted. At least in the case (ETA: Goddess) I checked, it searched tags and metadata, then put 2 and 2 together and blew the answer. The "blonde park ranger," a tag, is Jacqueline, but we only learn that in the text. The bot decided Hebe was the "blonde park ranger." Nope.

Spoiler alert and correct answer to the prompt question: When the story begins, Hebe tends bar in a modest joint on Market Street in SF.

Here's the exchange with ChatGPT.

PROMPT: in "goddess" by joe bondi beach where does hebe work

ANSWER: In the novella Goddess by Joe Bondi Beach, the character Hebe works as a park ranger at Zion National Park.

She is described as a blonde park ranger connected with the park.

The story's keywords and descriptions reference "Zion National Park" and a "blonde park ranger," indicating Hebe's role there.

So, Hebe's job/location in the story:
➡️ Park ranger at Zion National Park.

If you want, I can also explain who Hebe is in the story and how she connects to the Greek goddess Hebe (the book plays with mythology).

[Clicking on the "Sources" link gives a column that includes multiple citations to the listing for "Goddess" in Apple Books]

~ JBB

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@Bondi Beach

I posted ChatGPT's made-up story summary (Redemption) on my blog here. It's fanciful. Just before, I asked it to tell me where the detective went after she left Washington, DC. (Correct answer: Columbia, Missouri. Bot's answer: Wisconsin.)

PROMPT: in "redemption" by "Joe Bondi Beach" where does the detective go when she moves from Washinton, DC

BOT REPLY: In the novel Redemption by Joe Bondi Beach, the detective who works for the Metropolitan Police Department in Washington, D.C. eventually moves to Wisconsin, returning to the area where she grew up.**
• She leaves Washington, D.C. after professional and personal troubles.
• The move takes her back to her hometown in Wisconsin, where her family (many of them police officers) still live.
• The story then partly follows events and a chase that unfold after she leaves D.C. and travels there.
✅ Short answer: She moves from Washington, D.C. to Wisconsin.

If you want, I can also summarize the plot of Redemption or explain who the detective character is and what happens to her in the story. 📚

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