Hi All
Over the weekend a friend of mine rad "The Depositor" and made some suggestions that I liked.
I don't have many friends who live within my area so most information about my stories come in comments and emails from this site.
But this was in a face to face meeting.
The Depositor was rewritten slightly but the changes made it a bit more cogent.
It has been submitted and I think will be downloadable in a couple of days.
Let me know if it is more clear for you that have read it before.
Thanks for your readership and have I mentioned that I NEVER use AI on any of my works?
Writer Mick