I found a few typos, so I uploaded a fixed version. It should be live sometime today. I also fixed my master copy and when the story is finished, I’ll upload a repaired book to ZBS. Purchasers will be able to download a fixed copy for free.
In chapter 7 we begin to see where the green crystal comes from. This is where the basic substance of the story begins to differ from the original. Much of the story going forward will focus on the origin and power of the crystal.