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Now we really start to learn more about the crystal and how it affects concubines. More to come on those topics in the future.
Not much to say about this chapter. Teresa joins the harem and the concubines discuss what it is like to be part of the harem. Enjoy!
For the observant reader, you’ll find something wrong with one of the pics in Chapter 10. No, Jack really doesn’t have three hands! An error crept into the artwork. We fixed it, but the wrong pic slipped into SOL. I’ve submitted the fix, but it might take a few hours to post.
With Chapter 10, we effectively come to the end of the original story. Moving forward, it won’t be all fornication. We will start seeing how the crystal came to our protagonist’s life, and what it can do. We will also learn of the responsibilities it brings. Hopefully you will like it.
I found a few typos, so I uploaded a fixed version. It should be live sometime today. I also fixed my master copy and when the story is finished, I’ll upload a repaired book to ZBS. Purchasers will be able to download a fixed copy for free.
In chapter 7 we begin to see where the green crystal comes from. This is where the basic substance of the story begins to differ from the original. Much of the story going forward will focus on the origin and power of the crystal.
Over the years I’ve had people ask what rlfj means. I even googled it once and discovered it meant Rigid-Link Flexible-Joint, which is some sort of engineering gizmo for robots. For a long time I would respond it was an acronym for “Really Large Fucking Johnson!” (Trust me! Would I lie?) Since I’ve started posting stories on ZBS I’ve been using the nom de plume “Rollie Lawson”; that gives you a start. Not going to tell you what the FJ stands for.
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