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I was able to create some new cover art for many of the books I put on Bookapy. If you don't want the bland pastel cover art, check them out. You should be able to download new versions for free. Special thanks to GraySapien for his assistance.

But not me! I'm already thinking about a new story or two. Anyway, this one was fun and relatively quick for me. Whether that was good or bad is up to you, my readers. I hope you liked it.

Writing the scene about reading Sarah’s report to the police was very unpleasant for me. If you think that would be hard for a parent to read, it can be worse. The hardest thing I ever had to read was my eldest daughter’s report on her rape when she was eighteen, twenty-six years ago. It’s hard to read while you’re crying. Real life intrudes on all our writing.

If you find any errors, typos, or fixes needed, send them. I will fix both the SOL version, and in a week or so, update the bookapy version. Those of you who purchased the story will be able to download an updated copy.

As I mention in the afterword, I couldn’t have done this story without help from some excellent editors. Special thanks to grynslvr2, a long service police officer, for his information on police procedure and the FBI. Another big thank you goes to the incredible Al Steiner, for his information on ambulance and emergency services. As always, the screwups, and I am sure you will find some, are my fault, not theirs.

One of my readers pointed out that it was extremely unlikely that Jack Watson wouldn’t be reachable by phone. Pretty much everybody has a smart phone these days, and certainly the publishing company would have had that number in their files. That is true, so I had to do a quick edit. People do have phones, but they haven’t really developed one immune to being dropped in a toilet.

Special thanks to the incomparable Al Steiner for editing work in this and the next chapter. I asked him to review a few chapters for medical details, specifically emergency and ambulance procedures. For instance, I had written a section involving a helicopter ambulance being brought in. It turns out that it would have never been used in the scenario I wrote. I checked and it was only a fifteen-minute ride in an ambulance, and it would have taken longer than that to load somebody into the helicopter! He also pointed out a few other problems that I was able to fix. There’s a reason we all need editors! Thanks.

Going to play Grandpa today. Our son-in-law’s sister’s mother-in-law passed away and they need to attend, so they are dropping the girls (ages six and eight) off with us. Complicated enough? Welcome to upstate New York! Our town has about twenty-two-hundred residents spread out in three hamlets. My wife and I aren’t attending because we’d had a feud with her for the last thirty years. I commented to my wife we’d probably get arrested for dancing on the grave. Anyway, we love the girls so it’s not an imposition at all!

In any case, the story moves along. Enjoy!

The fun and games move to North Carolina. There’s trouble at Watson Manor. Enjoy!

I was recently informed of an error in Chapter 3. From ursus32: “One makes tents of canvas. One checks the hood doing a canvass.” Good point. Fixed.

For those who purchased the story (thank you!) I made a few slight changes to one of the paragraphs in Chapter 5. At the end of the story, after I have all the fixes and edits updated, I will upload the edited version to bookapy. You will then be able to download the final version.

Amusing incident the other day - our youngest daughter sent me a text. “Vikings - can you send a PDF or word doc so I can read on my computer at work and people will think I’m working?” Glad to see she’s working hard. I sent her a pdf.

More trouble on the East Coast for the Watson family, the FBI, and various local police forces. Enjoy!