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I’ve had a few typos. That’s expected, to a certain degree, and if you let me know of any errors, I will fix them and re-post the chapter. At the end, I will update the book and re-post it. At that time any buyers will be able to download the corrected version.
More discussion of politics, and some more Aragonda-style fun for Jon and Korona. Enjoy!
We get a little of Jonathan’s and Korona’s history. We also get a lot of fun and games in the capital! Jonathan’s future is examined as well. Enjoy!
A light change of pace in Chapter 8. Things get a bit more serious for the Sawbucks though Jonathan is up to the task. Meanwhile, the youngest Sawbuck navigates young love, difficult on any planet. Enjoy!
The Sawbucks get back to normal, or at least as normal as life on Lupina gets. Lots of sex, which is not a bad normal. Enjoy!
The line in Aragonda, “Pleasure me, subcreature!” is a direct take from the first Ghostbusters movie, where Sigourney Weaver tells Bill Murray, “Take me now, subcreature!” I think Bill should have obeyed orders before shooting her up with 300 cc. of Thorazine. Never mind that would be an injection of over a cup of Thorazine!
PS: Vanity, thy name is author. I got my first review on this story. “As I have mentioned in previous reviews, Rollie Lawson is one of my favorite authors. His books are always well developed and interesting. These same traits apply to this book. Here, we are introduced to a new world - Lupina - where partially (or full) nudity is accepted, and sex is not something that is hidden. This book does a great job of introducing this new world, as we follow the experiences of Jonathan Sawbuck, his wife, Korona, and their three children. The world is interesting and, once you accept the premises on which the book is based, you find yourself drawn into it and this family. A good read executed well by an author who has a known track record of well-written stories. Highly recommended.” Wow! Thanks!
Anyway, enjoy!
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