Sorry for the long delay—it's been a bank holiday weekend and I got a bit knackered. Washing up for 200 people a day is busy work. People downvoted me after my last comment, so that's the last time I comment about AI. I welcome all forms of constructive criticism: if you spot any errors that Steven or I have missed, please, please feel free to let me know. Spot any major plot holes too! I'm open to talking about it. If you want to insult me, please don't—I have no time or interest in getting into arguements, I'm to fat and to old to be interested in it. I enjoy writing this, and yes, I use the term "writing." James is one of my favourite characters, and I know I use the name a lot; it's just one of those names I really like. Having said that, the score did dip after my rant but has since bumped back up, so thank you to whoever helped with that—I really appreciate it!
That said, we are working on the next part! I hope you're all still enjoying the story. Again, wanna chat, feel free to email me! Or leave comment...