For reasons I don't fully understand, I was in too much of a hurry to post this one. I looked it over again yesterday and saw that it was riddled with errors, mostly the miskeying kind. I've been properly punished for my haste with some lousy ratings. I went through it again this morning, corrected all the errors I could find, and reposted it. If you've already read it, don't bother reading it again. Nothing really changed in the plot or characters; I just did it to make myself look less like an idiot to future readers.