If there is one thing I have learned this chapter it is that I have a lot more to learn.
Plot mistakes made me scrap several thousand words and then, later I had to start the whole chapter over!
Please be gentle, but I truly appreciate all the feedback, scores, and of course I cherish constructive criticism, even when I don't quite understand it. I guess I'm not as clever as I thought?
Have a great weekend, I'm going to go have a (rare) celebratory Scotch.