I’ve uploaded the new Chapter 2 and a new Cover Page. Please note, I didn’t rewrite the story. We (svtin and myself) simply tried to create pics to match the action. We think it mostly worked, but in case you find a discrepancy, well, oops! We did the best we could.
Part of the delay in loading the story is making sure the formatting is right. Once we know that is right, I’ll post some more chapters.