This story is exactly what you’d expect: kid gets caught jerking off by his mom, and things escalate from there. No surprises, no deep meaning—just pure, unfiltered fantasy.
The writing is clean and well-done, which is kind of impressive for this kind of story. You can tell the author really wanted this scenario to happen when they were younger—just like a lot of us did at that age. The writing is grammatically solid and surprisingly polished—so much so that it would impress even my editor.
Thumbs up!