I’ve sent a few stories to my editor to rip and tear through for me. So far, he’s edited Silo, Vampire, Angel, and Spotted a Burning Wagon in the Distance. Vampire is the first, so it gets to be posted first—it should be submitted sometime today, assuming no last-minute adjustments.
Personally, I think his editing has made a huge difference to the overall tone, pacing, and prose of the story. It feels sharper, cleaner—more like what I envisioned all those years ago. I hope you like it as much as I liked writing it—and he liked editing it. This was definitely one of my favourites, and one I wrote over ten years ago