I've completed uploading the edited versions of Chapters 1 through 4 of my story "A Submissive Sibling".
I ended up adding several thousand words to each of them, which does not significantly change the story, but adds more detail and removed a lot of the "tell" and replaced it with "show." There's probably no need to go back and read them again unless you are a big fan of the story. If I had to pick one to tell you to read again, it would be Chapter 4, which features a lot more of the parents.
Thanks to everyone who has read it, and especially to those who have left me feedback.
Malcom Walker
Nashville, Tennessee