I consider myself a new author, having only started to push stuff out over the last few months. I've gotten a lot of good responses about my story "A Submissive Sibling" and I'm very appreciative of that.
I recently pushed Chapter Six up, which ended up being a monster of a chapter. I paid careful attention to the editing on it and I think it ended up being a good chapter. I have the outline done to finish the next two chapters, which will finish the story.
However, since my goal is to eventually offer this for sale as a book on zBookStore, I want to make sure the entire story is as clean and edited as possible. I went back and looked at Chapter One closely, and noticed several instances of "telling" and not "showing". So I gave the chapter a very careful edit and rewrite and it ended up going from 2300 words to over 4,000 words. I also finally came up with a decent illustration for it.
If you've already read Chapter One, don't feel the need to go back. It does add some new material, but doesn't change the basic story. I do think it will read better and make more sense as I also go back and do the same to chapters two through five.
Malcom Walker
Nashville, Tennessee