Scary leap to ask for opinions on changing the series title from Unleashed to...
Enhanced - simple, but I think there are already 1.2 billion books with this title.
Augmented - I like the idea of hinting at augmented breasts, penises, but it seems like only half a title.
Amplified - too musical, and I suck at singing.
Intensified - I like the idea of the world intensifying around our heroes and their natural abilities getting intensified, but maybe too much of an adjective.
Enlarged - too simple but also too mundane, but I like the sexual overtures and implications.
Unleashed - what I have now seems like the wrong direction.
Augmented Humanity - suggested by TiberiusReign - possible, as it does describe the world
Link here: A Challenging Day
Link here: Jennifer Gets in Trouble
Reason: at first, I thought the direction of the story would go towards a single incident where Polana unleashes her desires, but being a pantsy, the character stole the story and made it go in a different direction and then other stories surfaced concerning the main character and sub-characters where Unleashed seemed less and less representative of the multiple story series. Since I'm only partially through the first story, I've decided to change the overall series title.
Thoughts: I liked the simple one-word series title, simple minds, simple thoughts, I guess.
If you have an opinion, please send a note with your suggestion and thoughts. (including - you're a dumbass, don't change it).
If you have any other ideas, please send them. If there is nothing else, it will make me feel that someone has read at least part of this.
Note: I didn't think amazing, stupendous, spectacular words would work - Spider-Man already stole them.
Stories (partially written or in final editing - working titles):
A challenging Day (in the process of being published)
Jennifer Gets in Trouble (In the process of being published)
Roshana Gets Popular (Working Title: in beta reading and editing)
Zer Helps a Neighbour (30% written)
After School Shopping (5% written, a look at the world from a shopping perspective - ie, more public stuff)
Jealous Much (5% written, School event and new student)
The Final Fight Begins (20% written, Polana graduation test)
Dead Testing Days (20% written, Physical Testing for Polana and crew)
The Death of Tyler (idea only - may not get written, and ramifications)
I have a new Job (5% written, Polana's new job)
In the Military (5% written, Polana gets drafted)
The Six Soldiers (Polana and five other soldiers on assignment)
Zer and the dog of a boyfriend (Polana's sister)
Behind Enimy Lines (5% written, a new character)