I've just uploaded the next chapter for "The Rat and the Dragon." It'll post whenever. I have a bit of a busy day today, so I will get to uploading all the fixed chapters later in the day. I have to deal with formatting and all that, and I gotta run out the door in a moment. I'll get to posting them all this evening into tomorrow morning, if I need to. Hope you all enjoy this chapter! I caught myself writing some of those "dangling modifiers" and dealt with it on my own like a big girl author! XD
As a side note, my new editor, Mr. Pixel, had a rather passionate comment about hymens when he got to chapter 11. This is why appendix's are important, folks. My elves don't have those (and I guess neither did I 'cause I never noticed my first time... eons ago...). I will have Roan make a comment about it when I make my final edits. Right now, the edits made have been purely readability and fixing glaring errors. Content additions will be reserved for published version.
Hope you all enjoy your day! I'm off to chase crotch spawns....