So one of my editors gave me a suggestion, which in my high opinion of myself I ignored. Then he bludgeoned me over the head with a wealth of information. At that point I couldn't ignore my own hubris. In this haze of realization, I made a couple of changes to the reveal of the Thanksgiving dinner being Albatross.
I have to thank Persecutor for giving me the smack to the back of the head that I needed. Hopefully I'll be more open to my editors suggestions, hell they know more than I do on certain subjects. Though there will probably be more instances like this seeing as I'm hardheaded.
Again thanks to Persecutor for his fabulous work in trying to make my work to be the best it can be. Maybe I'll have to send him a nice bottle of something for trying to keep my big head reasonably sized.
Y'all have a great week.