Chapter 3’s title is basically what happens. Tommy & Mary continue to be romantically involved. It’s relatively simple. It’s not the longest chapter, but chapters don’t have equal lengths. You break them where they make sense.
The results are in for whether to do a less graphic version of the story. Out of 8 respondents, 5 voted for a less graphic version. It wasn’t a great response rate, so I don’t think it’s all that statistically valid a survey, but I get the idea. (5548 downloads divided by 2 chapters; 168 votes, 8 responses?) When I finish with this story, I’ll post something between PG-13 and R. I’m not sure about doing it on Bookapy since there is a cash cost to getting an ISBN. FYI, historically, the only other story I’ve done this for was A Fresh Start, and the sales rate on that story for the last two years was 77:8, XXX vs. PG-13, almost ten-to-one! Not sure what the significance of this is anyway.
Enjoy!