I have uploaded what I believe is the best corrected and edited version I have of Secrets of Fathers and Empires. I hope that it meets the standards of this site. I am (if all corrections are made and complete) hoping to update the book on bookaply as well. I am ashamed of many of the errors that I, and others have found in this piece. I strive to become a better writer. Thanks to those who pointed out the problems.