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The second book of the void series is out the Desolation of Erimos, starts where stowaway in the captain left off. And it's a great thriller and an epic beginning to the quest to find the key to end the threat of the void. We also get the opportunity to see Alliyanna take her rightful place within the imperial, hierarchy. Alliyanna Kar’Jan has survived being hunted, betrayed, and forced into a political arrangement she never wanted. Now the Empire wants her back.
An Imperial Notice has been broadcast across every major civilian and government channel, ordering Alliyanna to surrender for questioning before the Senate. Her claim to the powerful Birsha succession is disputed, her movements are being tracked, and every decision she makes threatens to become evidence against her.
But Alliyanna has something more important to pursue.
An ancient book speaks of the Void, a force capable of changing the fate of the Empire, and of a mysterious Key divided into three fragments. The first lies somewhere beneath the burning sands of Erimos, a nearly lifeless desert world where daytime heat can kill, nighttime cold can freeze, and enormous predators move through the dunes.
With Talak and Kahlan beside her, Alliyanna chooses the dangerous path forward.
Stowaway and the Captain is now for sale in the z bookstore. Please check it out.
I have completely edited and rewritten this story; it’s better now, with better pacing and a tighter narrative. Most of the grammar and spelling errors have been corrected. If any still exist, I take the blame. They are mine. I am hoping for your honest feedback.
I have reposted AoCMJ I had to go back to the masters and reformatted and edit them, This will also result in an upgrade to the book available on Bookapy. I have done some editing and hopefully addressed most of the issues. I think I have and if there are still minor errors, I will probably not worry about them. I there appears to be many errors or goofy formatting this time... I guess I'll try one more time. But I really think its ok now.
I'm working on fixing the errors and reuploading it. I'm unsure of how the scrambled mess that is displayed came about. But I'm sure not of my drafts have that many errors I am going resubmit as soon as I figure out what went wrong.
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