It's been a long road with NIS: Breeder and thank you to the readers that came along for the ride. I've improved tremendously as a story writer, and in creating AI photos to enhance my stories.
There was a recent picture of Piggy with a butt plug that I admired in a second window for hours as I wrote. The look on her face as she stands in a restaurant with it sticking out of her ass reminds me of a nudist resort I went to where MILF women walked around with piercings and butt plugs like they were mundane fashion accessories and to them - it's not shocking - that's what I captured on her face.
It was quite a while ago I began this story. As I normally (and always should do) I wrote the entire thing and then started slowly polishing and editing a chapter at a time. That was back around April and in May I began posting.
https://storiesonline.net/n/33623/nis-breeder-program/1
I had such a good time writing it. I spent a long time just on the orientation day because I really wanted to explore that first day feeling and world build. I had people complain that it took too long to get started. I had some say they don't like pictures, I had some complain that I put a complete list of NIS rules for the Breeder program in chapter three etc.
You can't make everyone happy.I wanted the rules because they created a framework. I like making the pictures almost as much I like writing, and I try to write the character in the image. I did what I did and maybe there would have been just as many if not more who complained if i didn't do those things, or complained about something else.
The important part is that the story seemed worth a shit enough that someone felt like having an opinion about it at all.
I was told "This is not NIS" because I didn't follow the standard tropes. I also do not give a fuck about that. I wrote my own version, and folded in several concepts and storylines as I went.
If you have read the story, this may not be much of a spoiler but if you haven't here is the big spoiler so skip down.
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Piggy has been mixing her protein shake incorrectly and has a high content of the chemicals designed to induce submissive feelings/estrogen/pregnancy and lactation. It was supposed to be mild, but she's concentrated it. Piggy is not under mind control, but she has convinced herself that she cannot disobey orders. I've shown time and time again that she can/has disobeyed or questioned orders.
https://storiesonline.net/s/26772/morale-officer-not-moral-officer
What I wanted to do in this story is offer an homage to a story called "Morale Officer not Moral Officer" by a friend of mine, that explores what happens when a woman happily decides to become a submissive and her family supports it. It's just a 10 chapter story. I wanted to really prolong and make that feel plausible, but I relied upon the protein shake to also satisfy the concept that she had truly evolved her thinking toward going well beyond a standard submissive role into more of a human pet/filthy slut.
All the while, I wanted to explore her daughter's journey to try new things, be open to new experiences and define her limits less by what she does/doesnt like and more on what she can/cannot do physically or mentally.
I wanted to tell other stories, so I often allude to a rich cast of characters, and Piggy's sons experiences, specifically Dewey's relationship with a chubby girl that puts him on an emotional rollercoaster and lets him watch her making out with other boys.
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So, about chapter 68, I realized that I've gone a very short period, and I have so many more things to say and do with this story.
There are nearly 500,000 words at this point and the story isn't over. That word count is up there with War and Peace, The Stand, The Lord of the Rings TRILOGY.
I had one more important subplot, which you'll see emerge toward the end and now we have six chapters remaining. Keep in mind, I've gone as long as 24 typically pages for a chapter, but typically, I kept it around 14-15 pages for this. Some 9 chapter stories by other authors would be around the same total length of one of my chapters. Just know that while that isn't a LOT of space, I span this final arc and the birth and leave the story with a good idea of where the characters are.
I am actually looking forward to getting it all published soon. I may try to post two stories a day to just get it done.
However, I wanted to throw it out there that if you've enjoyed the story, not only can you pick it up from where it ends, or anywhere in between - there were many other character's stories who should be told.
Tiffany and her mother, Crabby and her daughter, Thelma and her Brother? Astrid and Ingrid? Jim and Laura (you'll see), all sorts of possible stories that could be spun off. Tales from Miss Collins as the NIS administrator in short story form.
Please, by all means - go for it!!
Mary Christmas: When I initially wrote this, I wanted a cool Christmas story and I wanted to post it before Christmas. I made the decision to put some of the other stories I've been working on temporary hold so I can do that.
The initial chapters (despite tons of foreshadow that this IS A Christmas story) received negative feedback, which was mind blowing. It was like all the people sending me email had never heard of the concept of the scheming brother that blackmails or gets his sisters in trouble. There are probably thousands of such stories.
I assured everyone that I don't write broken home stories or stories where nobody has Christmas. I cited literally every Hallmark Christmas story that has ever been made, that it usually starts off in a bad spot and improves. That's what makes it a Christmas story.
The bad dad who ignores his kids WILL have some crises at the airport or whatever that teaches him the true value of family, and in the end, he'll blow the Anderson account on purpose and be throwing snowballs with his wife and loving family.
Frustrated, I rewrote the early chapters to reinforce that "This is the best worst thing that ever happened to me because..it brought our family closer together an unexpected way".
For those who may have already a few chapters and didn't get that impression, I'd encourage you to check it out. I re-did the ending, and right now there are 19 chapters, should be about 24 by the time it's posted, even at one a day, it wont be posted by Christmas.
The New Foal: Fuck, I love this story. I just had to put it to te side. It's a pony girl story and there aren't many of these. Usually, it's about someone who becomes a 24/7 pony for some rich asshole or something. This is real people who just do pony girl fetish for fun, and they are planning a trip to a fetish campground to compete. it has some twists and turns, but it's far more plausible a scenario.
It's just going to take a little while for new chapters. I'll get one posted soon. I should have wrote the entire thing before I began posting. I was just so excited that I jumped the gun.
Aunt Scarlet: My literally red headed step child of a story. Mike McGifford came up with the initial idea and gave me permission to finish it for him. I tried but let it sit forever, and then finally wrote about 26 chapters. It's still not finished, but today I posted up Chapter 18.
This one will be on hold until I get Mary and NIS done. Then I'll crank it out. I occasionally get an email from loyal readers who dig this story. It's one of the rare times I didnt' write 1st person.
It's a fun one. Blaine and his mom have to move in with his red headed sexy Aunt (strangely a dead ringer for Scarlett Johannson). She works out of her house as a prostitute and after an unsuccessful job search and a very convincing used care salesman, the Mom also joins Scarlet selling a little ass. This one has much more sex than a lot of my stories, in fact pretty much every day is several sessions.
On the Horizon for 2025:
Nude Rules: Wait until you read this motherfucker. It's one of my best stories to date. I have 20 chapters complete. It's very different than anything I've done to date. I feel like the characters are quirky/have chemistry, and the scenario is hot. I don't have any BDSM in this story, but there is a type of power exchange. I wont' say there won't be something approaching fetish, but right now it's more of a classic "Embaressed Nude Female"/Coming of Age story.
It's a pure joy to write, I hope you will feel the same about reading it.
Happy Birthday: This one I wanted to do something simple and fun. An extroverted teenager started a tradition years ago with her parents running around in her birthday suit, getting birthday spankings on her birthday.
That evolved over time into gag gifts, party games like pin the tail on the donkey with her butt (not real thumb tacks, tape -you sicko!) lol. and face in the cake type stuff.
The mom also competed on her birthday, at first getting spanked over jeans, but eventually doing her birthday in the nude.
It's 12 chapters, and now that the girl is 18, she feels she "aged" out of it, her brothers are older and so now it's become an all day thing for her. In true Eddie fashion, I wasn't content to just play the story straight and do a day in the life of this unusual family with a naughty tradition. I added some twists. Expect that one early 2025.
I have some others on the horizon. I am mostly trying to write stories that are a little different than what I've done before, broaden my range, get back to basics, and not be too over the top.
I have one idea, I am calling "Burundi" where two sisters go with their family on missionary work to an impoverished African visit. I haven't worked out the details but at some point they'll be naked, out in the wilds, trying to survive, and end up in the big-city trying to get home. That's the vision anyway.
I just thought I'd share my plans for the immediate and into 2025, and in other news;
This past week, I also decided to pull two stories that I have had languishing a long time.
1. NIS: Summer Camp.
This was supposed to be my homage to Meatballs (The classic) not the Corey Feldman Meatballs IV travesty.
Camp of plucky rejects led by a Bill Murray type and Hot Blonde against the rich campers upriver, hijinks and escapades. A young female camper becomes a CLIT (Camp Leader In Training) and is assigned a cabin of six boys who can give her reasonable requests.
It seemed like a no brainer fun time, but for whatever reason I lost the plot and never finished it. I removed the story until I revisit the idea.
2. Humilation Games: I wanted to do an alternate universe where after Influencers like Kim Kardasian become ultra-bimbos and cash-in, there is some backlash and 200 years later, women are second class citizens treated more like pets than people. They are bimbo-fied to humiliate them as opposed to put them on a pedestal, becoming more parody of a natural woman, and small titties are highly prized because most adult women have massive breasts due to genetic coding/special diets, and societal insistence on modifying lips, asses, etc
In other words, being a Kim Kardassian ultra-bimbo type is so normal, that maids and nannies look like that, and any woman who is natural is considered rare or a pariah. I called it "Humiliation Games" as a take on "Hunger Games".
The main character grows up believing this, and is chipper and upbeat.
My plan was that at some point, she has a Wizard of Oz style experience, wakes up in a fancy bed, and realizes all of the members of her family are there but now the roles are reversed and the brother who teased her, is her cuckold, and her mother is not a big-titty bimbo at all but a powerful executive who treats her husband like a maid. It was going to be sort of a twilight zone story.
Unfortunately, I just couldn't do it. I didn't enjoy writing the scenario even knowing the twist. I liked making the AI art for it, but that was about it.
So, those stories are gone.