Thank you for the responses. I'm happy to know most of you still appreciate a good raunch fest now and then (provided there is a semblance of a plot).
That said, look for a new short soon under this pen name. I'll apologize to the few who shared their aversion to cuck/revenge subgenres as this one... well, my tentative title is "Cuck you!" lol. Those who expressed their love of "John"... this one may be right down your alley.
Also, I am seeking two to three volunteer editors who would be willing to proof it beforehand and are not adverse to MAX Triggers.
Dys
