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Chapter Two is up

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I've received a lot of DMs so far, some constructive, some toxic. I forgot how many lovers of this genre there are.

Thank you to those who provided helpful edits and spelling corrections. I've made several corrections and reposted them.

To the rest of you toxic Avengers, go grab a fresh sock and chill out!

Cuckold story begins

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I have submitted the Intro to 'Cuck You!'. TRIGGER WARNINGS! If you can get through the prologue, you can probably handle the ending.

Cheers,

Dys

Short story-Novella...Tomato-Potato

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Okay, so the short story I mentioned has grown to 20K words so far, and I'm still working on it! Things have gotten a little out of control (as often happens to me.) Maybe I just cant write a short story! I can't help it. Anyway this tale is 100% pants (slang for seat-of-the-pants--a style of writing that doesn't usually involve a plot or initial outline. It just develops). I started at the beginning, then one night, I lay awake and thought up an epic ending, so I got up and spent the rest of the night writing it down. Now I'm filling in the rest. I'm at the point where I may start releasing one or two chapters (after they are edited). There are no major cliffhangers, I promise.

In case I don't stress this enough in the Submission criteria... this story is NOT for the timid! It is over the top with just about every trigger you can think of. Except for murder maybe... but I'm still writing so who knows?

I will leave comments open because I want to hear your thoughts. But don't bitch about cuck, S&M, bondage, rape, drugs, abuse, torture, incest, cheating, vulgar language, revenge and intense graphic sex. (there's a story in there, too, I promise) You have been duly advised.

Cheers,

Dys

Well that answered that question.

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Thank you for the responses. I'm happy to know most of you still appreciate a good raunch fest now and then (provided there is a semblance of a plot).

That said, look for a new short soon under this pen name. I'll apologize to the few who shared their aversion to cuck/revenge subgenres as this one... well, my tentative title is "Cuck you!" lol. Those who expressed their love of "John"... this one may be right down your alley.

Also, I am seeking two to three volunteer editors who would be willing to proof it beforehand and are not adverse to MAX Triggers.

Dys

Just wondering if anyone out there still follows

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Hey Readers,

I am also known as Rottweiler for those of you who don't know me by my other pen name. But I was known by Dyspneic in my earlier years here and on the Lit site. Do they still exist?

Anyway, much of my writing has evolved to the point that I have shed most of the steamier, salacious, naughty, erotic, lustful, raunchy, and spicy side of literature for a more mainstream appeal.

That is not to say that my mind doesn't still fall in the toilet now and then and thinks up a story or two. I'm just curious if there is still an audience here for it.

Rotty/Dysp

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