I have completed the overhaul for DV1. What has changed? Not much. I split the chapters in half when possible so there are now 20 in total chapters. I have removed most of the Sex. What remains is vaguely inferred or described in dialogue.
And I have added a lot of material throughout the story to smooth it out and help establish the plot and story line going forward.
If you are looking for a rub and tug this isn't the story for you.
Regards,
Rotty
