After listening to all of the pundits, and comparing what my work is to others here, I decided to take some time and go back over 201 and 301 and make the corrections that I can see myself. Things that I should have had done before I posted this story.
I don't expect to get everything. There are too many sharp knives (Sorry readers) here to let me ever think I will get all of the errors caught up.
But I do think I can manage to clean up my act here a bit. I"m sorry if It disturbs the two or three readers here who actually like my stories.