As I’d expected, the version of this story I posted earlier wasn't ready for publishing. Cleaned up the first 4 chapters, changing it from primarily telling to more active storytelling.
The revision is taking time, so I’ll be making periodic updates, before I begin posting it. So, if you’ve already purchased a copy, download the latest revisions and see how much it’s changed.
It can be found at Bookapy’s Nowhere … Like Home? Any feedback or suggestions are appreciated.
