It lives!!! The subplot lives!!!!! (insert threatrical laughter here).
Chapter two has been checked for grammar and so on, but needs to be revised, will be doing that much later on today before posting before the weekend. So far twelve pages if I add any more I'll inform you. And I think the fact that I made the subplot both exist and mesh well with the overall theme and potential Jared holds, damn interesting, considering how the more graphic content of my stories is usually the driving force behind my interest in producing them. Hopefully that won't suffer here too, I just got carried away with the dramatics, as one tends to do in this situation xD
Anyway, it's probably up tomorrow and I checked, Chapter 5 for "The Wicked Few" has been updated today to reflect a slightly diferrent delivery towards the end without changing the ending itself, and if I'm not wrong I think I also updated chapter 1 of Traitors dream, but the changes were just small things I wished I'd noticed before, grammatical errors, things of that nature.
Okay, good night and good dreams and like always thank you for your time and patience.