I started with the intent of teasing a new story. I typically don't post until I have written the entire thing.
However, I made an exception simply because I was so excited about this new story to share it with you.
I chose a LORA (persistent character) for the Mom in this story that I thought would be cool, but I am having some difficulties with making pictures with it.
I decided to make a "casting change" of sorts, so soon you will see a revision to chapter three
https://storiesonline.net/n/36875/the-new-foal-a-pony-girl-story/3
If you see an updated date for today or later, that's the new character/chapter. If not, please enjoy the previous Carmen until then.
I have asked for consideration not to vote until I reach Chapter seven. I do thank the people that gave the story high marks, but if you are planning a down vote - please give me until chapter seven with this story to make an opinion on it.
Honestly, I wish authors could decide when people can vote, because chapter one is never enough to make a decision. There must be a point in the reading where you know it's going to interest you and it's usually not the cover, chapter one, or the foreward.
In any case, I also posted up the next chapter of NIS.
Chapter 55 represents an "arc" in the story. You could almost consider it complete with Piggy's birthday party. It's going to get bumpy on this ride after ths point. There are many twists and turns ahead.