If you aren't an American, you probably could give two shits about the Fourth of July.
However, I wanted to write something short for Fourth of July. I didn't get it completed until pretty much the end of the evening.
https://storiesonline.net/n/34555/firecracker-mom-red-white
It's a mind-control story. The real difference here is to showcase some of my AI imagery. I included 9 captioned photos in two chapters.
I was able to make consistent characters, upscale and really improve upon my craft. I enjoy creating nasty worlds and scenarios and sharing them on here.
I think writing now is just one component of that. The ability to craft my own images enhances and adds to it. On it's own, the story is a relatively novel mind-control story about a boy that hypnotized his mom for the right reasons (stopping smoking) but connects it to her deepest desires to be humiliated and embarrassed through her subconscious.
I also wanted a reason for a woman to shoot bottle rockets out of her asshole, and put sparklers in her butt. If you think that's over the top and outrageous you can find tons of porn of it on the Internet with just a few searches of Youtube and Motherless.com. It's usually done at parties by some slutty bimbo.
It was a challenge getting the AI to recognize what I wanted it to do. However, a bit of a learning process for me.
I made about 120 photos, some of which were perfect for the story. However, I paired them down to the essential.
There was one photo of the gang bang at the end, with hash marks on the woman's ass that would have been perfect. However, I decided to go another way and I already had an illustration for that scene.
Overall, it was probably 10x more enjoyable to me to complete this project WITH pictures, than it would have been to write it without.
Surprisingly (to me, anyway), I received about 9 comments from readers expressing constructive feedback about the story. That's much higher than my normal average of (checks notes)... almost none!!
Some people did not enjoy the twist at the end. I almost didn't add it, but I wanted the story to feel "concluded". I was tempted to go back in an add a different ending.
Let me know if feedback after you read it how you wished the story to have ended?
A few people also wished the story was longer. Me Too! but I am still editing and working on Visiting Aunt Scarlet and NIS: Breeder!