I need someone to simply read the story "Visiting Aunt Scarlet" as a proof reader.
https://storiesonline.net/s/23522/visiting-aunt-scarlet
If you are reading it anyway, that would be fantastic.
My friend who helps me does not like the context of the story. A woman and her son move in with her sister. Her sister lives a 24/7 functional bdsm relationship with her husband and also works out of her home as an escort. In the course of this story, it's really about the son's confidence/education on worldly matters as he grows to understand a different lifestyle.
I've written the story. all I need is for you to read it and tell me if you see any gaps, awkwarding or missing words. I use the internal email system. As an example:
If you see:
They were there at restaurant
You might quote the line and write
They were at the restaurant.
I use MS Word, Grammarly, and my own eyes to proof read and I can find issues in other people's stories like a hawk. in my own story, since I know what's supposed to be there, I sometimes blank it out.
I would be happy to do the same for you in exchange. It would also allow me to post much more frequently. I spend 3-4 hours on each chapter pre-post just editing.