As mentioned, I'm doing a bit of editorial TLC on some of my favorite stories to get back into writing.
Next up is a hopefully much better version of "Speak Now Or Forever Hold Your Peace" - one of my unashamedly preachy soap box stories
Despite the well-argued urging of the SoL reviewer who wished for a longer more involved ending (I appreciate their care and passion) the story-line is untouched: One or two explanations may have been added and an emphasis changed here and there, but it is still the story about the-wedding-that-wasn't.
I struggled with my original harsh criticism of Hugh Grant who made some dreadful films after "Four Weddings and a Funeral". I still find those films awful, but his work in "Florence Foster Jenkins" launched a fantastic mature career renaissance, going from strength to strength.
Still, George "GT" anno 2016 couldn't have know that so the wording stayed in.