This story is going even longer than I thought.
Not in terms of how long its taken me to actually write it, that much I know, but I mean in terms of story progression. I'm a little worried that I'm going too slow and simultaneously too fast if that makes any sort of sense. Obviously I want it to be clear where the story is going so that it doesn't get boring, but I also want to keep some sort of realism, or at least the allure of it.
This is what I'd love the most feedback on. Is it sill tantalizing? Is it still exciting as to where the story is going?
In addition to your thoughts, I'd love to know your ideas for what the two main characters might get up to or where you think the story is going.
Thanks!