When I first joined this site, I penned a story called “I Think my Boss Needs to Pee” which if it wasn’t obvious enough by the title is a watersports focused story about a boss and her office mates/colleagues getting in different situations where they had to pee.
The idea was that it would also include of light sex, primary but not limited to lesbianism and generally be a tale of a young entrepreneur trying to make it in life and figuring herself out.
But I only got two chapters in…
So if I were to give it another try, would people be receptive or would is that frowned upon here?
With a new story titled “The piss chronicles of Howe high”. Like all my other works, this series caters to the watersports crowd and features both students and staff in situations where they are in desperate need of a bathroom and need to find some other way to pee…or not.
Unlike my other work on this site, this is an anthology project, so while I might reuse characters from time to time, I intend for most of these stories to be disconnected from each other.
The other thing is I plan on only using female characters. Of course there might be males mentioned but certainly not the focus. I really only want to write what is hot to me and I’m not into dudes, so if that’s what you’re looking for, sorry :(
That being said, since this is an anthology work, I’m totally open to suggestions! If you have your own character or idea, let me know and I might include it! And give you the credit for the idea of course. Just send me a dm or comment here and I’ll be sure to read it.
Lastly, if you have any feedback for me as a writer, let me know! Positive or negative, I’d love to know what I’m doing well or can improve on!
This story is going even longer than I thought.
Not in terms of how long its taken me to actually write it, that much I know, but I mean in terms of story progression. I'm a little worried that I'm going too slow and simultaneously too fast if that makes any sort of sense. Obviously I want it to be clear where the story is going so that it doesn't get boring, but I also want to keep some sort of realism, or at least the allure of it.
This is what I'd love the most feedback on. Is it sill tantalizing? Is it still exciting as to where the story is going?
In addition to your thoughts, I'd love to know your ideas for what the two main characters might get up to or where you think the story is going.
Thanks!
As I'm working on Chapter 2 of "I think my Boss Needs to Pee" I'm wondering what the appetite is for chapters with little sexual content.
With the title the way it is, I think it's clear the main focus is obviously pee/piss/wetting scenes and scenarios, but sex will come into play as well. Just not in chapter 2.
I personally like stories that at least attempt to have actual characters that have more to them than just sex scenes. That being said, I'd hate to post anything boring or that makes the reader feel like they wasted their time.
Also, while this story is still developing, now is your time to ask or recommend any scenes or sequences you might like to see in the story. I'm open to a lot of things, though I still want to make clear that I reserve the right to say no.
Lastly, any feedback on plot or the writing itself is always welcome! Can't improve if I don't know what I'm doing wrong
Just uploaded my first story to this site “I think my boss needs to pee”.
Let me know how I did, good or bad, and what needs to change. It’s a Watersports/Urolagnia/Omorashi story, but I’m sure you knew that just by the title.
I want to focus on a decent plot with some interesting characters at the very least. Hopefully it goes well.
Anyway, let me know what you think! Kind of a niche fetish involved, but there will be sex, I promise!