This story is going even longer than I thought.
Not in terms of how long its taken me to actually write it, that much I know, but I mean in terms of story progression. I'm a little worried that I'm going too slow and simultaneously too fast if that makes any sort of sense. Obviously I want it to be clear where the story is going so that it doesn't get boring, but I also want to keep some sort of realism, or at least the allure of it.
This is what I'd love the most feedback on. Is it sill tantalizing? Is it still exciting as to where the story is going?
In addition to your thoughts, I'd love to know your ideas for what the two main characters might get up to or where you think the story is going.
Thanks!
As I'm working on Chapter 2 of "I think my Boss Needs to Pee" I'm wondering what the appetite is for chapters with little sexual content.
With the title the way it is, I think it's clear the main focus is obviously pee/piss/wetting scenes and scenarios, but sex will come into play as well. Just not in chapter 2.
I personally like stories that at least attempt to have actual characters that have more to them than just sex scenes. That being said, I'd hate to post anything boring or that makes the reader feel like they wasted their time.
Also, while this story is still developing, now is your time to ask or recommend any scenes or sequences you might like to see in the story. I'm open to a lot of things, though I still want to make clear that I reserve the right to say no.
Lastly, any feedback on plot or the writing itself is always welcome! Can't improve if I don't know what I'm doing wrong
Just uploaded my first story to this site “I think my boss needs to pee”.
Let me know how I did, good or bad, and what needs to change. It’s a Watersports/Urolagnia/Omorashi story, but I’m sure you knew that just by the title.
I want to focus on a decent plot with some interesting characters at the very least. Hopefully it goes well.
Anyway, let me know what you think! Kind of a niche fetish involved, but there will be sex, I promise!