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Wilkins and Friends Home Nudity edited with minor revisions

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Dear Readers,

Now would be a good time with the New Years holiday to give this book a reread. I have read all 14 chapters again this week and so has my editor, Steve. Or please read the book for the first time. It looks great downloaded on a tablet or on your phone.

With the completion of book 1 of the Home Nudity Experiment it was time to go back and edit, revise and word smith. Edits have been done to chapters 1 to 11. I posted the first chapter in July, 6 months ago. My style of writing is I just put pen to paper with a couple of goals and write. I literally let the characters interact on the page and see what happens. As my editor Steve comments these characters have depth and motivation. Yes there is sex among family and friends. But hopefully it all makes sense. The characters are imperfect and the idea in itself that mere nudity with liberal boundaries can solve their problems is problematic as you will read.

My goal with each chapter is to surprise you, the reader. This is fiction so go with it, but also question the characters motivations and choices. Look for clues as to what is coming. This a character driven story with some sex along the the way, yes there is sex in each chapter.

Along the way were learn Bob is in a National Guard Special Forces unit scheduled to go back to Afghanistan. Bob’s sexy archaeologist sister gets a job offer from a secret military unit in Colorado Springs (Fanfiction SG1 teaser). JoAnn, Bobs wife, we learn has an incestuous past. The 4 kids all have issues and mix it up with the family in bed and out of as they figure out their sexuality. Then there is Pastor Scott and his family who jump into the deep end with home nudity and all that follows. Big boobs and adult breasfeding. There are friends who join along with relatives, Bob's and JoAnn's parents. This story starts in November 2005. Bonus, starting in chapter 11 to 14, I start to experiment with AI generated character art giving the readers some character nudes.

The story does not wrap up with chapter 14. There are loose ends. I envision 3 books total. A 3-act story with book 2 / act 2 getting darker and crazier.

So, I wish you a Happy New Year, 2024.

Pete

 

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