From: cwsawyer
To: THodge
Subject: Re: The Adventures of Tim Bodge - Chapter 70
Message:
Chap 70
Deniece turned and said, “Get the kids up and Miss C is waiting in the shower.
Deniece turned and said, “Get the kids up, and Miss C is waiting in the shower; by the time you finish with her, breakfast will be ready.”
correction
Deniece turned and said, “Get the kids up, and Miss C is waiting in the shower; by the time you finish with her, breakfast will be ready.”
his reputation as a fearless Tim and skilled explorer.
Alturnative
his reputation as a fearless and skilled explorer.
Or
Tim's reputation as a fearless and skilled explorer.
I have changed the wording and am gratefully for your help.
Terry