My writing wasn't up to my current standards when I started on this. I's already rewritten from scratch one, but this week while rereading to refresh my memory for new writing, reworded some sentences and emoting that were clumsy, and on a few places added detail to the story by replacing some telling with showing, making the writing style more consistent with later chapters. I uploaded chapter 1-3. I'm going through chapter 4 now, but it looks like any further edits will be for clarity and misspellings.