I am two chapters away from the conclusion of "The Beatings will continue until morale improves".
https://storiesonline.net/s/29555/the-beatings-will-continue-until
It's a story about a shy nerdy kid that is too smart for his own good. He's on a vacation to Panama City with his Aunt and her three daughters. They are stuck in a cramped RV.
In many ways, this sounds a lot like my last story "Hands Full of Innocence".
A shy nerdy kid, stuck on an RV with his family, and his big breasted cousin from Brazil, His Aunt, Uncle and their son.
https://storiesonline.net/s/31079/hands-full-of-innocence
I write a lot of shy/smart nerdy kid main characters. That's because I used to be one. Now, I am a perverted old man - still nerdy, not as shy.
I think the set up is similar but it's a very different story. I realize as it comes to it's conclusion that there was more I could have told about these characters. They were fun to write.
If someone enjoyed the story enough and wants to continue Patty's journey with her daughters down the road after they drop off Hunter at his parent's house - be my guest. I'd love it!! I am curious what was waiting for them in South Dakota. It probably wasn't Hunter's Uncle Bob.
What is next?
I have several nearly completed stories that need some TLC to be completed. I have only one that is ready to be published. It's 32 chapters in length. That should give me enough time to finish the follow up conclusion.
The title is "Call Me Misty"
I had actually completed "The Beatings Will Continue" about four months ago and went on to write several stories that are not ready to be published. Full disclosure: Call Me Misty has a character named Misty and Hope but they have no relationship to the characters by the same name in the Beatings Will Continue. It's just a bit of a coincidence.
I've posted up an advanced copy of the first chapter. It should be published on the site by the admins pretty soon. It won't spoil anything to tell you that the first chapter sets the scene and establishes the characters.
The main character isn't as shy and nerdy as many past main characters. His name is Michael Hunt (Yeah, he HATES being called Mike. His dad thought it would be funny and insisted on it when he was born).
His Dad isn't in his life much any longer. His mom is and she catches him beating his meet to some bondage porn. In the process of laughing at his humiliation she asks if he actually knows anything about tying up women and expresses some interest in it.
That's as much of a teaser as I can provide you.
In the second story, I have about 17 chapters completed so far. (They all still need editing which takes the MOST time). I decided to split the story to begin with a trip to the ren fair.
I had previously asked a question in my blog about ren fairs. I've observed that a lot of the people into bondage and kink also enjoy ren fairs. I decided to tell the story of an afternoon at one. It includes everything from belly dancers to big breasted women in thin white shirts shaking up seven dollar glasses of lemonade for thirsty dads who love to watch.
My experience at Ren Fairs is that they are for the entire family but they do have some risqué' humor. The best way I heard an entertainer put it was "You only get the jokes you are supposed to get".
If the joke goes completely over the kids head- it's safe to tell it in front of him. If he knows what the joke is REALLY about it, he can handle hearing it.
That was the general idea. You'll see women in skimpy outfits, magic performers tying themselves up in straight jackets, snake charmers, fire breathers deep throating torches, people jumping in mud, and if you are lucky some knights, swords or hawks and medieval stuff too!
I spent the first part of the second book taking the family to one, and I am taking my time with it.
I also have some other half-finished stories or close to finished stories that need some polish. The problem is that if I put a story aside to work on another, it is really difficult to get back into that one and keep working on it.
I hope you will enjoy Call Me Misty. I hope you also enjoyed The Beatings Will Continue. The readership is one of the highest I've had since "Keeping the Babysitter In Line"
https://storiesonline.net/s/26845/keeping-the-babysitter-in-line
That's probably one of my favorite stories. If you haven't' read it - a LOT of me is in that story from way back when. There are 55 chapters and I felt like I created some memorable characters.
In fact, if you are bored and want to read some stories, may I suggest my back catalog?
https://storiesonline.net/a/eddie-davidson
I rarely see anyone read my old stuff. It's hard to believe everyone on here is an old-timer who read everything I ever wrote. I assure you - my older stuff may not be as polished because I didn't have much help with editing and didn't even own MS word.
However, my new stuff isn't that well polished either.
So check it out. :)
PS: Bad Choices Make Good Stories
I believe that. There are times when we make a bad choice that leads to a good outcome or at least one we didn't expect.
Many of my stories illustrate that, however I do plan one sometime towards the end of the year that I plan to call Bad Choices Make Good Stories.
I was thinking about revisiting one of my oldest and most popular stories "Do You have a Big Dick, why not?"
https://storiesonline.net/s/20017/do-you-have-a-big-dick
I wrote it back in 2019 and people still write to me about that one today. A reader suggested that I jump ahead five years.
I may do something else entirely with that title, but it's likely that I will have Karen tell the story about how her bad choices led to her leading a very happy life as what she never knew she wanted to be - a human pet.