From: cwsawyer
To: THodge
Subject: Re: The Adventures of Tim Bodge - Chapter 61
Message:
Chapter 59
head down, purged her lips
should be
head down, pursed her lips
position we disgust
should be
position we discussed
they had disgust
should be
they had discussed.
Chapter 60
From Tim’s desk, Shanae stood and walked toward the bridge. Taking one last glance at the work she had been doing, Shanae headed for the bridge.
Should be
From Tim’s desk, after taking one last glance at the work she had been doing, Shanae headed for the bridge.
Chpter 61
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