I had a message from someone who told me that my story description sucked - his word, I'd have said crap - and he is quite correct, I'm a better salesman than that! Like my old school reports I could do better.
I wrote 'The Engineer' as a series of stories rather than chapters because it works better for me, but it is best treated as one long story.
It doesn't seem possible to change the story description once you have posted.
So, Susan three: This story is part of a side branch of 'The Engineer' series. In this episode Susan muses on the changes to her life over the past few months, helps a distraught Frankie, does an interesting fashion shoot and has a big surprise when she gets home. It is best to have read the previous two stories in this series, but even better if you have read all of 'The Engineer'.
There we are, I'll now go back to writing the next episode. Oh yes, and Jake White is in my mind, but much more difficult to write than this!
Happy reading
Martin