I'll post the Epilogue chapter to The Nexus Book 1 and then that is the end of the first volume. Some thoughts on my first story:
First, I'm surprised the story is getting such poor scores. Maybe it shouldn't bother me, but it does. I do plan to fully edit the story before releasing the second book (which is finished). I wish some of the people who gave the story such low scores would leave comments regarding why they feel so negatively about it.
Second, I'm glad the story is getting some eyeballs. We'll see how the second story goes, and whether more people start to read once it's marked as completed.
Third, I appreciate everyone who has taken the time to read it, score it, and even send me feedback. Please send more!
I'm currently working heavily on another novel for my normal writing career. Once this draft is done, I'll be returning to finish my rewrite of Nexus Book 1. Currently I've paused middraft around Nexus book 1 chapter 6 to work on this project.